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Reviews for Tangled Threads - A Story of Pirates

By : KiwiGirl
  • From GeminiGirl on August 02, 2007
    Jack a 'traditional brother' - decidedly not!

    Loved the ending, exactly right and as it should be. You did a fabulous job with this story, thank you for writing and sharing it!
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  • From GeminiGirl on August 02, 2007
    I was holding my breath all throughout this chapter, what a change of pace from the one before! And what a huge relief that Jack finally made it!
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  • From GeminiGirl on August 02, 2007
    I think I have fallen in love with Will, seriously. How can a man be so... utterly wonderful?*sigh* Loved them getting one over that Martinez!
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  • From GeminiGirl on August 02, 2007
    I loved the little detail of the compass going mad...

    This chapter is beautifully done, the distraction of both Will and Bella during dinner, the building anticipation and then finally they are together. Just perfect.
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  • From GeminiGirl on August 02, 2007
    Oh what a beautiful, beautiful chapter this is! Finally they are together like they should be... well not quite but I'm sure that will come too!
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  • From GeminiGirl on June 30, 2007
    The reunion of Will and Bella was lovely. Just lovely.
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  • From GeminiGirl on June 27, 2007
    Aww... Will needs a hug!
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  • From GeminiGirl on June 27, 2007
    Poor, poor Bella, my heart breaks for her. Not exactly the nicest way to discover that you love someone, thinking that you have lost them forever.
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  • From GeminiGirl on June 19, 2007
    So - Will and Bella are safe, or so it would seem. Though what safe means to one person might not look like that at all to another...
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  • From GeminiGirl on May 18, 2007
    What a magnificent image, the Pearl leading the English Fleet! LOL

    I'm glad that Jack has finally caught up, though it would seem he is just a tad late...
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  • From GeminiGirl on May 09, 2007
    What a relief to find that Will and Bella have a possible ally in Jones... this Carlos guy sounds decidedly nasty! I wonder what it is that he's really after?
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  • From GeminiGirl on May 04, 2007
    What a lovely, lovely chapter! Too bad Will has to be so honourable... I have all confidence in Bella making him see sense though!
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  • From GeminiGirl on April 28, 2007
    I was glad to see you've updated! A great few chapters, loved the bit with Norrington "rather careless of you Sparrow", could just hear him say that. Am also loving how things are progressing with Will and Bella...
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  • From monklikespunk on April 15, 2007
    Horay for updates. Love this story its so exciting always leaves me on the edge of my seat.
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  • From GeminiGirl on February 25, 2007
    I believe some of those threads are slowly starting to untangle...

    Great chapter, loved all the little details that gave me such a clear picture of that dismal ship that Bella and Will are imprisoned on - wouldn't want to be left at the mercy of that crew! I think Bella will yet be very happy to have Will there with her...
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