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Reviews for Tangled Threads - A Story of Pirates

By : KiwiGirl
  • From ANON - PiraticalAngelofDeath on October 04, 2006
    That was a very good first chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. But it will have to wait.
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  • From ANON - Gem on September 28, 2006
    I really like your Will, he seems to have come into his own and has perhaps learned a thing or two from Jack...
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  • From ANON - Gem on September 20, 2006
    I like the strength of the women in this story, wouldn't have been easy times to live in. Poor Bella, so desperate to find out about her past and no one's talking...
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  • From ANON - Gem on September 14, 2006
    Loved the tension in this one, can't wait to find out what this brilliant or mad plan is!
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  • From ANON - brooke on September 09, 2006
    this is an awsome story when you have more e mail me
    hurry with the next chapters keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on September 05, 2006
    I find this intriguing! It's very much original, I haven't come across anything like it.
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  • From ANON - Gem on September 04, 2006
    I didn't realise there was another chapter here... Beautiful description of the ship and the sea at night, almost makes even me want to go on a sea voyage and I am not overly fond of that mode of transport at all. Love Bella, how determined and fierce she is. Glad to see she can look after herself!
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  • From ANON - Gem on August 27, 2006
    Chapter 4 - Poor Bella, I could feel her loneliness and fear. I hope she won't do anything rash...
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  • From ANON - Gem on August 20, 2006
    Chapter 3 - I wonder where this map of Jack's leads and I can't wait to find our more about Bella's mysterious past. She's an interesting character and I can already see she's going to play a big part in things to come - perhaps in Will's life too?
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  • From ANON - Gem on August 20, 2006
    Chapter 2 - The first part with Will at Selena's - sigh... I think Bella will prove more than a match for Jack and will give him a few grey hairs before this story is done! Loved the way you described Jack, you really have him down pat.
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  • From ANON - Nuit on August 16, 2006
    love all these tangled webs and suggestions and promises, and especially Will as something more. Keep it coming honey!
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  • From JustCallMeCaptain on August 14, 2006
    Intersting..I like it tho. I'll check back when ya post more!
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  • From ANON - Gem on August 14, 2006
    "Men groaned in despair when the Pearl docked and the women sighed in anticipation."

    I can just see the havoc the pair of them would cause! : D I like the way you describe Jack, some people dismiss him too easily. Am intrigued about Bella, where does she fit in and what is this map Jack is looking for? And will there be more of Will? Lots of questions and interesting characters and Tortuga - what a mix!

    A great start, looking forward to more!

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