Reviews for The Flames Which Consume Us

BY : Angel Marie


  • From ANON - LadyMalfoy on November 30, -0001

    Wow. that was amazing. I really liked it. It's upsetting that it's finished but it's all good. I still really liked it!

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  • From ANON - Leslie on November 30, -0001

    Wonderful story. It really captures Erik and Christine's characters. You've done a nice job with it all.
    Bravo!

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  • From Angel Marie on November 30, -0001

    yea, yea, ok, well, I know I have to update. I will, I promise! but it will only be part of the story b/c I don't have it finished yet. lol. I'm working on it, really. As for Spikesbint, yea, they have helped me immensely. I just am not at home right no

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  • From Jula on November 30, -0001

    Hey girlie!

    You still need to seperate the paragraphs and capatalize the letters at the beginning of sentences.

    Oh and one more thing, please update... slap*! And longer chapters.... Is Spikesbint helping ya so far? If not, I can help ya if ya want.

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  • From ANON - Kristine on November 30, -0001

    ::happy sigh:: Ahh, if only that happened...I would've died a happy woman...::purrrrrrrr::
    I admit, I've only read a handful, literally, of POTO fiction, but I must say how much I'm loving this one right now!! Well-written, not ridiculously graphic

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  • From Jula on November 30, -0001

    Oaky I finally got my account back up. My tard ass forgot my user name and password.

    I put up two of my ficcies for now. One is a joke, and the other is a Spuffy fic.

    Anyhoo, I talka to ya later!!!

    Squishees!! And Huggles!!!

    Now back to our l

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  • From ANON - Phantom\'s Christine on November 30, -0001

    OOOOH! I loved it. it was great!

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  • From ANON - angelgirl on November 30, -0001

    Such a poetic ending! I love this!

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  • From ANON - Skimbleshanks on November 30, -0001

    *Applauds!!!*
    Wonderful! So romantic too!

    Luv Skimbleshanks!
    xxxMwahxxx


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  • From ANON - spikesbint on November 30, -0001

    Hi angelmarie, I would like to offer my services at a beta for your work, if you still have no one email me at the above address and I would be happy to help you.

    Angela

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  • From Angel Marie on November 30, -0001

    kk--well, i have updated! yay, go me! lol, as for a beta, still have none yet so therefore it is in my own version of editing(which is rather barbaric in means). i hope this format helps those of you who had a hard time reading one HUGE paragraph. lol. i

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  • From ANON - Shadoe SIRII Solaris Austere on November 30, -0001

    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Why must you stop???!!! Please, I beg of you. CONTINUE!!!!!!!! Or I might have a worse fate than the Phantom!

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  • From ANON - Jula on November 30, -0001

    Just ignore RAOULSTHONG... he's a noob and he's being sarcastic.

    A BETA is someone who will go over your story before you post it and correct technical and grammatical errors in it. Basically it's being an editor. Sometimes they will fix it or just

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  • From Angel Marie on November 30, -0001

    ok, yea, so i'm glad that so far you all like. that makes my writing esteem go up. *sigh* i hate using quotes, so instead i'll just move each speaking thingy to a new line, ok? and paragraphs will appear some how through my use of seperate lines. kk? al

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  • From ANON - Skimbleshanks on November 30, -0001

    ... Are you planning on continuing this, or are you just going to leave us there? Leaving us there is redefining cruelty, I hope you know!
    Hoping to see a second chapter!
    Skimbleshanks

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