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Reviews for The Flames Which Consume Us

By : angedelamusique
  • From ANON - The Phantoms Christine on November 30, -0001
    Wow... this is hot so far... but please don't make the rest of the story one big paragraph.... you can easily get lost and put the dialogue (talking) in quotes... update soon!
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  • From ANON - fairy on November 30, -0001
    I like your story so far. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - fairy on November 30, -0001
    I like your story so far. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jula on November 30, -0001
    Always edit your story before you post it!!! Try using a spell checker and try using paragraphs! Each paragraph should be 3-5 sentences long and be spaced so as not to give the reader a massive headache. Most readers won't bother reading it if it does no
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  • From ultrahotpink on November 30, -0001
    An intriguing start but it is very hard to read with no paragraphs. Your descriptions are good but perhaps you might consider finding a beta reader to proof read for grammer and such. I did like it though.
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  • From ANON - angelgirl on November 30, -0001
    I like this. I rather see this happen in the movie than Christine ripping his mask off. Update soon!
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  • From Operafreak on November 30, -0001








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    you are skilled with the written word a true wordsmith you are better than shakespeare and Jane Austen combined i loved the way you formatted
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