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Reviews for Freedom's Slave

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Datiye on August 05, 2003
    Stop saying stuff is crappy 'cause we think its good. An author will always think less of there own work ( which is why my stuff is in notebooks ins of of here, hehe ). But I will reassure you that none of this is crappy. I think you have Jack's form of grief and saddness right. I don't see him as the crying type either. I think he would probably get mad and seek revenge, but thats just my opinion. And I know ya said you are giving up on A/L pairings (yeah, i know, switching topics but its still orli ) so why don't you just move of to differant pairings. I would love to see more LOTR fics from you. But this fic is more important anyway. Well, like I said, great stuff, keep going and GOOD LUCK!!!!!! Hehe, have fun writing!
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  • From ANON - Earen on August 04, 2003
    *laughs* That last line was luffly. I'm really enjoying this! Woohoo!
    So Will all beat up by bastards? I'll kill zem! Bwhahaha!
    Anyway! Continue on, yeah?

    Earen
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  • From ANON - angeluspoet on August 04, 2003
    I really like it just like the rest of your stories. it's one of the better AU's i've ever read most of the time i like things that stick mostly with the original story line. i know pushing dosen't help but write more soon i can't wait to read more.
    Love, angeluspoet
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  • From ANON - Raz Gaiale on August 04, 2003
    Ooo, three endings! Anything that makes the story go on longer is fine with me. :)

    But that last one sounded a bit ominous.....You just LOVE messing with your readers' minds, don't you? ;)~
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  • From ANON - nita on August 04, 2003
    I've been sick the last few days. -sniffles-

    I'm gonna r and r when i read, Expect to get lotsa support and demands for lolli's from me, kay?

    -hugs-
    Neets
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on August 04, 2003
    Evil storm, delaying your update. I hate it when the power goes out... one time I didn't have internet for DAYS because the modem overheated. I almost died I tell ya! I really liked Ana's story, is Jack ever going to hear of it? Wow, three different endings you say? Impressive. The one I'm really rooting for is that happy ending one. I can't stand non-happy endings. I'll still read them though... but I don't like it as much. I'm a sucker for happy endings, what can I say? ^_^ Can't wait for more, keep up the FANTASTIC work! I'll pray for no more power outages. Hehhe.
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 04, 2003
    poor Ana :(

    but YAY! to Will for helping her!

    and then poor Will for gettin beated :(

    3 endings?! woooow... and you don't have to hide! If you hide, how will you give us more stories?

    as always, update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Earen on August 04, 2003
    XD Oh this is good! But the parts are so short!
    Loved the thing about Cotton at the end of 4
    there! XD Awesome!

    Earen
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  • From ANON - Datiye on August 04, 2003
    Don't you dare say that was a crappy chapter! It was great. And so sad, a w a way to die, looking at your friend. Well, I will be awaiting the next GREAT chapter. And my ever so popular reveiw ending, Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Natalie on August 03, 2003
    Interesting! I love it! I want more!
    *holding a 17th centuary pistol to Aithilin's head* write writite ite write!!!

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  • From ANON - Insane Pineapple from Naboo on August 03, 2003
    Mindless? Oh, no. I don't actually go looking for abusive fics under Lord of the Rings. I just stumble across a good one from time to time while looking for Aragorn/Legolas fanfictions. People just seem to love to torture my poor elf. Right, Ana does seem to inspire everyone around her. I feel sorry for Jack. He's going to have to get through Anamaria to get in a relationship of any kind with Will. I like how you showed Jack's vow of revenge for Bootstrap. Btw, I won't just tie you to chair. I'll tie you to a chair in front of a computer with nothing but caffeine to keep you awake until you write the next chapter, savvy. I write even through in the sugar treatment if nothing else works. Lots of sugar *always* works.

    Ja ne,
    ~Insane Pineapple from Naboo
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  • From ANON - Stormy1x2 on August 03, 2003
    Not a crappy chapter! ^^ I like flashbacks!

    I have my own theories of just why Anamaria is so protective of Will based on the hints you've given us and that ridiculously noble nature of his. ^^ I can't wait to see if I'm right or not!
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on August 03, 2003
    Ugh... it's 830am... why am I up... ugh. Man, I can barely type. Sorry for any errors ahead of time. Oh yeah, I came back from a vicious sleep over, and was like, hmmm any new fics? Low and behold, yours was up! And as for your last comment, this WAS a good chapter. I really enjoyed reading the flashback. And I'm telling ya, I'm also really looking forward to the next flashback... I thought you mentioned one about Will and Ana... it's too early to remember. Anywho, great chapter! Can't wait for anotherone. Also, keep up the FANTASTIC work. Such a great fic I'm telling you. Off to I g I go... sorry if theres lack of coherency. wow. Big word even with sleepyness....zzzzzzzzzzzz.......
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  • From ANON - SwordsNSparrow on August 03, 2003
    Another brillant chapter! I love how you write Jack. The storyline keeps getting better every chapter. Keep up the great work. :)

    - Tony.
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  • From ANON - SwordNSparrow on August 03, 2003
    Hey, that was another great chapter! I liked it. Keep up the good work! ;)

    - Tony.
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