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Reviews for Freedom's Slave

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Nicole on August 25, 2003
    Hey sweetie!!!!!

    What do you mean your not sure if you want to hug me or hit me? After all of the torture that you have put me through!!!! :-) I mean I am stuck on chocolate now for hea sak sake! *mmmm yummy chocolate* ;-)

    I loved it. I was wondering how you were going to get Ana to talk to Jack. Though I should have figured you would get Gibbs to give Ana permission to hit him! :-) Aha the action for the reaction. You realize you had me thinking a hundred different things. *sighs* You do that just to torment me don't you? *glares* Grrrr Just when I was having a happy moment you had to bring Barbossa into it didn't you. Such a sweet Jack. This is how I pictured him to be with someone that he does love. It's about time. Please let Ana make a mess of those slavers!!! Jack too!!!

    Hugs and happy readers,
    Nicole

    Hey Nita!!!! I would go with the small daggers! More fun that way!!!!! ;-)
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  • From ANON - MadoushiClef on August 23, 2003
    Hmmmmmm.... Wrtie longer chapters. Man, the last few updates have been really short.

    Your writing is fabulous, as always. Jack is being... very patient with Will. VERY patient. But sometimes I think it's more for Anamaria's sake. Wow, she can stay angry long. But she's got just cause. (Jack does want to sleep with Will.) I wonder what trouble they'll be getting up to in jolly ol'e London, ne?

    Want more. Write faster. Borrow my comp if you have to. Oh yeah, and when do we get to the slash?

    ~Clef
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  • From ANON - Earen on August 23, 2003
    I am gone for like a week and this is I
    gI
    get of this? Bloody cheap man. Better hurry
    cause I'm disturbing my roomie by being
    up at all hours. So hurry with more! Next time
    I get to be on, you have to have more!
    *stabs some one with something blunt*

    Earen
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  • From ANON - Kary_Asakura on August 22, 2003
    Weeeeeeeeee! haha, sorry for that imprudent question. I don't mind, really (yeah riiiiiight I'm saaaaaaaaaad!) But, they say that you have to wait for things to get good! Nice chappie, tough short. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Nita on August 21, 2003
    Lovely to meet you Nicole, it'll be a pleasure sharing Favorite Reviewer spot in our beloved writers heart. Plus, we get to attack flamers and get TONS of pirate lollies. Everyone else get's one. We get more than one when we review. Except for me, i have hundreds because i fight off flamers and advertise her fics in odd places. This'll be fun. You prefer shot guns, or small daggers Nicole?

    Neets
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  • From ANON - nita on August 21, 2003
    im hurt. Truly. Honestly. Depletly. How dare you say I'm not a pirate.

    -sniffles-

    Have you forgotten i wrote the pirates code?

    -sniffles-

    I just get over a horrible flu and here you are, insulting me heritage.

    -sniffles-

    Cute darling chappie but still.... you've hurt me. Deeply....

    -sniffles-

    War, Sniffles, and piracy
    nita-sniffle-!
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  • From ANON - Sparx on August 21, 2003
    I liked this chapter =) And I missed the update on the last one, and I liked it as well. I like the bond you have between Will and ariaaria, it's very interesting and a unique plot point. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Datiye on August 21, 2003
    Don't worry about shortness. It was a great chapter. I love anything that gives a little bit of history. Great job, Keep going. Good Luck and Happy Writing!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 20, 2003
    Hey sweetie!!!! And Hello Nita!!!! :-) Okay you answered one question what about all of my others. Not to mention the new ones you have broght to mind!!! sigh I know you do this to us on purpose! ;-) Thanks sweetie!!

    Hugs and lots of chocolate,
    Nicole

    P.S. I found the rope and you better believe that I will use it!!!
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  • From ANON - Nieni Springs on August 18, 2003

    .... hmmm... purty good so far! *grins*
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  • From ANON - Kary_Asakura on August 16, 2003
    Amazing story.! I have only on tiny little question.... Slash.soon?¿? n.n There you have it! te ste soon
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  • From ANON - Ruka on August 15, 2003
    I love your story, Very creative. I'd like to read more.
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  • From ANON - Nita on August 14, 2003
    Im still sick, damnit, otherwise, you'd have reviews comming out of the wazooo!


    Everything is so wonderful i don't knwo where to begin, oh, and as a warning to other reviewers.

    IM HER FAVORITE SO TRY AND TAKE MY PLACE AND I'LL KILL YA!

    But feel free to review until your brains implode.

    jack is so totally Jack without becoming an AU charcter which is very difficult soemtimes in AU's. You have such a grasp oin Will, you manage to keep him the same basic person only with a battered soul. Ya gotta loive you gift with the written word,

    On the anamaria front, im kinda waita bia bit until she jumps out, savvy?

    otherwise, i love EVERYTHING!

    but i won't be able to get my ass back to a comp for a while.

    Flu's are a bitch.

    War, Love, and Piracy
    nita! -coughwheeze-
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  • From ANON - SwordsNSparrow on August 14, 2003
    Heh, that is so cute. I love how Jack is all affectionate and playful with our dear Will. Especially with the nicknames he gives him, like "Whelp." Awwww...that's just too cute. Go slashy Jack! He makes me happy. 'N Will too, since they're the obvious couple here, heh. Anyway! That was another good chapter. Keep up the excellent work! I can't wait until the next one comes out. Sorry that your html codings didn't work on your site. :(


    - Tony.
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  • From ANON - Pickzee on August 13, 2003
    You are a great writer, stop say that your stuff is crap, or horrible. At least you can actually finish a story. *Looks guilty and runs from rabid Tamora Pierce fanficcers* Very nice plot, keep writing so I can keep reading. I liked the kohl scene. *Psycho grins* Wondering when we'll see Barbossa, revenge is good.
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