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Reviews for Freedom's Slave

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Datiye on August 13, 2003
    *ACH* I would never hurt Will or Jack! They are much too precious to me. But thats okay. I dont need to but in on every fic ( but it was fun ) So Jack does get revenge! Yes! Yes! That is such a beautiful thing. THats what I really want to see. W I' I'm short on time so, reveiw over. Sorry. Well, Good luck and Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 12, 2003
    I loved this, I especially loved the flash back. Keep it up i can't wait!! ^_^

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  • From ANON - Earen on August 12, 2003
    Well at least you've updated :) SO short tho!
    *dies* They're moving along so slowly, but then
    all the better I guess.

    Why can't have have the sharps? I really want
    to help Jack :) Pwease? Ne? *licks canines*
    I might jus hafta bite them instead. *grins*
    ovedoved the part, even tho it was so short!!! Continue on!

    Earen
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  • From ANON - Lydia NightShade on August 12, 2003
    OMG!!!! You like Voltaire???!!! I LOVE them! And that's one of my fav songs and I love that look Jack has in his eyes at the end too!! I'm sorry I haven't even finished your story yet but when I saw that I sqee-ed so loud I think I woke me mum! LoL! y, Iy, I just haven't seen a lot of people that like their shit and I got a little over zealous I can't wait to read more of your story but I just had to say that you rock! (excuse my fangirl ranting I'm actually not normally this teenie-boppery) But squeeee!m lim listening to When You're Evil right now!

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  • From ANON - Insane Pineapple from Naboo on August 11, 2003
    Gr, I feel like I'm in an army camp. Now we've started drill. Marching. For eight hours straight. In eighty-five degree weather. It's only better than the marching around in blocks we were doing. At least I don't bounce anymore while I march. Yes, I just said bounce. As much as I hate horror movies the Scream movies were just gross. They weren't really scary, but they were sick. Sympathies sent from the Black Pearl. Excellent chapter. I don't mind the shortness of it. I'm in a very strong case of writer's block at the moment, so my readers would be glad to hear anything from me. Wow, that would be so funny if you found a way to let Anamaria slap Jack just for old times sake. Ahoy maties! We're shippin' out!

    Ja ne,
    ~Insane Pineapple from Naboo

    P.S. One last note about band camp. I live in a Redneck in the middle of nowhere. Because of band camp, I have a farmer's tan so I fit right in. Now, I just need an old beat down pickup truck, and life will be good......
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  • From ANON - hellsangel25 on August 11, 2003
    i suck at writing so i read. now i hate to push but you need riterite more cause you've got me hooked to this story!
    byes
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  • From ANON - SwordsNSparrow on August 08, 2003
    Heh, that was really good. I'd like to see more of that great work you're producing. I love Jack/Will and think you write it really well. I like how patient and gentle Jack is with Will. 'N even the seemingly jealous Anamaria is amusing. Thank god that Mr. Gibbs is in her counter of the ring. She needs someone to distract her anger from Jack. I think he's doing a fine job as well. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! :)

    - Tony
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  • From ANON - SwordsNSparrow on August 08, 2003
    Aw...nice work. I thought the ending was cute. Can't wait to see what happens.

    - Tony.
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  • From ANON - SwordsNSparrow on August 08, 2003
    I liked it. Things are starting to get really good. Keep up the great work!:)

    - Tony
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  • From ANON - Earen on August 08, 2003
    Nai? *piku* Onegai?? *grabs at sharp things* Onegai -shimasu-?
    I just want to torture the slaves a little... get some blood running
    make Jack want to draw more. Ne?

    Lovely chapter. I loved Jack getting info out of Will that way.
    So kyute! Kawaiiiiiiii! *squeals* Mmmmm, so yeah, have some
    nice Jack / Will soon? Some sweet cuddling? Kissing? WAFF?

    Earen
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on August 08, 2003
    HI! Oh that was good. I liked that scene where Jack was asking Will about the scars. Very cool. *grins* I like the phsycological torture too. Hehhee... *takes stick back* I didn't hit your head! ... Did I? I'm so sorry if I did, I was aiming for the writers block. I would do the same thing again, seeing how you said it was stilll kinda plaguing you. But I wn'tn't want to risk another head wound for you. Looking forward to more, keep up the /FANTASTIC/ work!!
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  • From ANON - Tinnuial on August 08, 2003
    Hello!
    :)
    So this is what you needed the info for! hehe....well it's a wonderful story so far, as all your stories are....looking forward to reading more. You come up with the *most* intriguing AU's!! I love it!!!....please update soon!!!

    Tinnuial
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  • From ANON - Datiye on August 08, 2003
    Yay! New chapter! And it was kinda sweet too. Don't worry about writers block. *waves black pirate skull wand* Tada! All gone! Didn't work? Oh well, I tried. If ya need some ideas I could always add them in my reveiws. Like maybe Jack could ask Ana if she knows where any of these slavers could be so he can show his true pirate colors. Black. of of course the silver of steel. Just an idea, don't know if it would screw up your ending(s). Hey, are you reading 'You Can't Rape The Willing'? Ya should 'cause the author gave me a cameo in the fourt chapter that just made me giddy with joy. Ya should give it a look see in your spare time. It's so hilarious! But your still my fav, they're #2. You will always be #1! Anyway, great chapter ( who cares if it's short? I don't. ) Good luck and Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Sparx on August 07, 2003
    Nice chapter! Loved when Will told Jack who hurt him and how and why. More soon, this fic is excellent! Writer's block, you say? How evil! *hiss* Surely this is all building up to something though and I can't wait to see what it is!
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 07, 2003
    *sigh*

    poor Jack, feelin all guilty bout not being able to keep his promise to Bootstrap... but he is now.. kinda..

    is Gibbs goina spill the beans that he knew about Will when they went to England to find Bootstraps wife?
    will Ana stop freaking out about Jack spending time with Will?

    how long are you goina make me wait til I know whase ise is happening?!

    update soon please!
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