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Reviews for Freedom's Slave

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Insane Pineapple from Naboo on August 07, 2003
    I'm so sorry I didn't review the last chapter in time. Band camp is a very difft cht challenge to work with when trying to read and write fanfictions. Because of it, one of my stories is about a week overdo for an update. I think I'm going to run off, taking only clothes and a laptop, and joining Jack Sparrow's crew o' the unlikley. Then, I'll come back after band camp is o'er. Apparently, it gets much better after camp. I guess after five and a half hours of marching in the hot sun while hearing shouts of "Left Lateral!" "Band, About Face!" "Mark time hut!" and "Right face, left face, left face, right face, half right face," anything sounds better really. Then comes the hours of memorized music. Sorry, I tend to ramble a lot. Great chapter. Anamaria is gonna half to trust Jack one of these days. He can steal her boy, but he can't steal her boat. I love how you show how Will puts so much trust in Jack. It shows AU in a new light.

    Ja ne,
    ~Insane Pineapple from Naboo
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  • From ANON - Mei Leng on August 06, 2003
    Heh, hadn't expected to see another chapter so fast but I'm not gonna complain. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Hally on August 06, 2003
    Loving this, but need more, and soon.
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  • From ANON - Sparx on August 06, 2003
    I love it!! This is a wonderful fic, and I love how you've written it. The plot is absolutely wonderful. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - L-sama on August 06, 2003
    * lets out a retarted sounding giggle* That was gud. New chapter please. Soon. Or I shall have no choice but to horribly gore you with a tooth brush.
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  • From ANON - Sparx on August 06, 2003
    Wonderful fic, and a VERY interesting idea. That's one turn from the movie I hadn't thought of, if Norrington/Governor Swann hadn't saved Will that day of the pirate attack.
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  • From ANON - ShadowSpirits on August 06, 2003
    ::Glares at the site as it wouldn't allow her review for the last chapter go through.:: Stubborn thing...

    I don't think Ana will be too happy knowing Will has Jack's cabin....oi....she's as stubborn as this sit.But.But I hope she gets used to Jack in good time ^^ Though I am a bit worried for what could be thveryvery bad' ending....as long as there's a good one as you said, I'm sure people won't try to kill you XD

    K'so....forgot what I was going to say... x_X Gomen...

    (There's PLENTY of slash pairings in YGO XD Though I think half of the time most of the yaoi authors just find the slightest thing to go off of to make a pairing work.....ho-hum ::Goes to bed.::)
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  • From ANON - Datiye on August 06, 2003
    Well, Ana sure got pissy quickly! Oh, I'm sure she has her reasons, whatever they are. So, will our young Will be staying alone in the cabin at night I wonder... Hehe, I should stop have such naughty thoughts. Ana would kill me! Good luck and happy happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on August 06, 2003
    Yay, new chappie! It's okay that it was short, writers block is evil. *hits writers block with stick* Shoo, SHOO! *grins* Did it leave???? I'll threaten it with an axe next time, if it didn't. Hehehe... Aww, poor Ana. Hopefully she learns soon that Jacks a good guy.

    Now why would I go and challenge you to writing a happy, fluffy fic? I /love/ dark, angsty fics. So you'll get no challenges from this mouth! Speaking of dark... are we going to hear more about Will's time as a slave? Just curious... ^_^ Can't wait for another chapter, keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 06, 2003
    just when I was thinking I'd have to do without one of my fic fixes!

    tsk, what is up with Ana? She may not like Jack, or how he treats Will, but she should at least be nice to him... 'specially since he's the captain and could have her thrown overboard.. I always find things like that as motivation to be nice...

    although I can see why she would be a bit shocked the Will spoke to her like that, so far he's seemed very mellow

    and as always, I'm dying (dieing? no.. dying looks right..) to know more!!

    update soon please!
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  • From Earendilstar on August 06, 2003
    *glowers and takes her sugar back*
    Mine. XP
    Great great great chapter! Wow, Will and Ana having a spat?
    That's just... very very very awesome! Poor kids, so *waggles
    eyebrows* If Will stays in Jack's cabin, does Jack as well?
    Will we get some snuggling at least? And can I cleave one
    of the buggers' ears off? I wanna get at those bastards that
    hurt will too! Please give bad me sharp objects! Oneg!!
    !!


    Earen
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  • From ANON - hellsangel25 on August 06, 2003
    i remember reading in one of your summeries that jack and will would get together i just hope it's soon. then you need a sceen where ana blows up at jack cause she thinks he useing or forcing will. or since will is using his cabin even if jack isn't with will in a sexual sense yet you can still have ana blow up. anyway just some ideas cause i want the next chapter fast. you write better than me so write and don't be hard on yourself. byes
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  • From ANON - Mel on August 05, 2003
    Alright! Finally got a moment to get back to fics, I've been meaning to look for more of your stories^_^

    Very cool story! I've g the thesaurus now, so I can use better adjectives in the future...

    Anyhow, I like how you're quick in explaining certain aspects, explaining the histories and whatnot so as we't 't have to guess. And you even kept Will and Ana inractracter, given different backgrounds! Kudos.

    ^_^V
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  • From ANON - Mei Leng on August 05, 2003
    Yay, I liked this.Good going! Post another chapter out ASAP please! And I hope you're planning on expanding the happy ending. Happy endings are...happier. Oooh, and they make you feel all warm and gooey inside ^.^
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  • From ANON - Jessica on August 05, 2003
    I love this fic! LOL. Please update soon!!!!!!!!! I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!
    =what more can I say?
    -Jess-
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