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Reviews for Freedom's Slave

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - Amarin on September 10, 2003
    Sorry about the irritating reviews. I like your fic, and unlike /some/ people I've no objection to the pace of the relationship between Will and Jack. It's more like real life that way. Besides there are lemons enough for those who simply must have their fix. If you are having writer's block it may help to write about something completely different, say recipes or something.... it usually works for me. I think you've got a better grasp of Jack's inner character than you suspect...it seems to me that he does value his word more than anything else (well except maybe the Pearl) and that it would make him melancholy.
    Completely off the subject, is it just me or does Jack Sparrow wear a ring on his ring finger on his wedding ring finger with a black pearl set in it. I think he's married to his ship! ;-)
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  • From ANON - Ryanne on August 31, 2003
    please please im begging you, don't even consider stopping with your POTC fics. i have spent all day reading "Coming Along" and this one. You are such an incredible author, dont be discouraged. I love your stories, and do do really good with charecterization.
    ~Ryanne~
    Will/Jack forever
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  • From ANON - Hockystar on August 30, 2003
    I read your story, I love it... but i'm horrible at reviews. I know what you mean by reviews that just ask to update...but unless the fanfic it so terribly bad with spelling errors, bad formatting, horrible ooc-ness...I don't tend to get inspired to write reviews...
    It's kinda like writers block aint it? I like what you did with Anamaria's character, I can see her, being the only woman on board, being sweet on Will in any fanfic, because of his upbringing and his just adorable noble-ness. I can't think of anything thats not clear to me...you explain things excellently! I love your writing! That's all, I guess...I can't think of anything else...
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  • From ANON - Esperanza on August 29, 2003
    Honestly, love, I think ye describe him quite well, savvy? Much better than I'm doing. :) He's actually speaking clearly in my story, which will change. Sometime. But, really, don't stop writing. Your story's quite intriguing, and a very good AU. And Annamaria is just perfect. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Lhune on August 27, 2003
    I read your fic at fanfiction.net and since you advised to come look here...

    WOW I really like your stories... please please continue!!!
    Oh and I'm so glad we've been released of that annoying Elizabeth and have some more Anna-maria (or whatever she's called)

    Now I'm really curious what will happen next!


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  • From ANON - Datiye on August 26, 2003
    Ah, nothing like sweet revenge on horrible slavers. Yay for the ggod guys. I hope Will and Jack can work out whatever they have to work owhatwhatever that is ). A tavern? Really? Thats so cool. I always wanted to own a bar in real life ( still hope to) Ya see, this is why you are the greatest. Still number 1! Good Luck and Happy Writing!
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  • From ANON - Nita on August 26, 2003
    To Nicole:

    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Have some harpy knives -passes them in a well wrapped parcel-

    Oh,and some pretty daggers, you know, just to discouradge flamers.

    Question- whats your favorite torture method Nicole?

    War, Love, and Piracy
    Nita!
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  • From ANON - Nita on August 26, 2003
    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NICOLE GET"S A CAMEO!

    .........can I get one as a smarmy wench Anita who slaps jack? And if any one asks why, i get to say, "Every one else is doing it" and shrug. Can I pretty please? if not in this fic, another one?

    -snickers- Sweet strawberry line!

    I love the kindness you showed the slavers. The kindness Jack showed. Me, i would have made a promise not to kill those men no matter what, savvy?

    Now, what I find best, is how you made Gibbs the new Anamaria. Anamaria is an important character in this fic, and Gibbs has become the small yet equally important role in the fics.

    Suggestions:

    more parrot.


    War, Love, and Piracy!
    Nita!
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  • From ANON - Datiye on August 26, 2003
    Yay! First kisses! I love first kisses. Esspecially sweet somewhat or wholly innocent first kisses. And thats just what you did! You are so the best. Your still my favorite. And I see revenge coming up. I've been waiting for the revenge ( especially since you said it was coming ) I can tell it's gonna be good. I cant wait! Well, I'm short on time so I got to go. Good Luck and Happy Writing!
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  • From on August 26, 2003
    Good chapter. I can tell that your characters are getting more accurate. ::Shakes head:: Anamaria has slapped Jack. Poor Jack, but that was one of the funniest parts of the movie. Is the Pirates of the Carribean soundtrack any good?
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  • From ANON - Kary_Asakura on August 25, 2003
    .......... My review went to hell! Damn it! Now I can't remember what I wrote...... u.u Oh well, sorry that my review(s) made you angry and stuff. It's not that I read the fics because of the slash, 'cause there are thousands of stories without slash (not even a relationship) and I like them a lot. Just wanted to make that clear.

    Good Chap. btw-

    C-ya
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  • From ANON - Borris on August 25, 2003
    Good. I like it. Mostly IC, and what isn't is forgivable. The romance felt just a little rushed to me, but not so much that it's a probably. One suggestion - in the movie, Jack only uses the word "savvy" when he's being a smart-ass. I would avoid using in what is supposed to be a tender moment. But otherwise, good. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2003
    Good. I like it. Mostly IC, and what isn't is forgivable. The romance felt just a little rushed to me, but not so much that it's a probably. One suggestion - in the movie, Jack only uses the word "savvy" when he's being a smart-ass. I would avoid using in what is supposed to ten tender moment. But otherwise, good. Keep up the good work.
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  • From on August 25, 2003
    you're briliant. i love your story and all i can say is that i hop to see the next chappie soon. Otherwise, thumbs up!
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  • From ANON - hellsangel25 on August 25, 2003
    yay, i'm glad jack and will have finally gotten together. Now remeber you promised that ana would blow up, lol. anyways i love the story and hope the next update isn't too far off. though i understand that school can make it harder to find time. so byes
    love hellsangel25
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