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  • From Eamon280 on February 06, 2011
    This story is quite amazing right now, Ive added it to my favorites and definitely await what will happen with Betanu and Connor, amazing story so far, can't wait for more
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  • From CLTexas84 on February 05, 2011
    Ooooo and the plot thickens!! Im really into this story and really enjoy what youre doing with it. I love the relationship between Cross and her son, and that natural meternal instincts and that bond of mother and son can cross even species. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Rev on February 05, 2011
    Ok, I lied. I couldnt keep away long enough for you to update two chapters. Duuude, if I was Cross I would been like, so what if he your son, why the flip was he left in the middle of the woods?! Screw you! =D I feel mean saying this but I hope Constantine is dead so Cross can get with Betanu and make babies....or just practice making babies if they cant make em together. XD
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  • From bloodravyn on February 05, 2011
    holy hell!
    i was not seeing that coming, not at all!
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  • From chiken8mafechan on February 05, 2011
    whaaaaa???? his son?!?!? he wants him NOW? I´d be pissed off to be sure! Looved how the story´s going!!! hehe will Cross end up on the Yaut`ya planet? By the way is the General fully human? He just seems so strong... More chapters please!!!
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  • From Werewolf2030 on February 04, 2011
    Still loving the story.
    I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the great work ^_^
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakaskhi on February 04, 2011
    You update faster than I can review, which is awesome!
    I love the explination of Conor's abilities! Mother/Son bonding, I never would have thought of that.
    I cannot believe the General let him go, but as you pointed out, His daughter means more to him than anything. Also, I cannot believe that the 8ft tall super tank even acknowlaged the little Youtja misfit. Can I call him the Big B... Can't spell his name at the moment? O.o I like the Big B so far! What happened to Constantine? He DISAPEARED! You said you had a plan for him, I wonder what it is... death by Xeno, explosion, jealiously?

    I am glued to this fic, so keep up the good work.
    Good luck!
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  • From bloodravyn on February 04, 2011
    ooooh, I am soo loving this so far!!!
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  • From ANON - Rev on February 03, 2011
    Ha! I didnt know I could review on this website. Oh well learn something new everyday. XD
    I am loving this story!! It rocking my socks! =P I really really cant wait till the next chap, but a warning, I may not read it until you update the chap after next because the wait is killing and it so much more awesome to read it like a book. I love this story. XD
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  • From Werewolf2030 on February 03, 2011
    YAY Conner! Show the General your not to little to kick his arse!! I hope his mom will be okay.
    I love the story!
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  • From bloodravyn on February 03, 2011
    eeeps!!!!!
    i was so worried!
    but what if conner and betanu see each other somehow?
    will they fight? what?

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  • From Werewolf2030 on February 03, 2011
    I love this story. I feel bad for what happened to Conner. I look forward to reading more of this story ^_^
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  • From bloodravyn on February 03, 2011
    oooh, rawr!
    love it!
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  • From chiken8mafechan on February 01, 2011
    wow!!! this is really cool!!! will Cross and Connor meet other yaut'ya in the future? It would be fun and funny to see the results!! I get the feeling Constantine will die... just because of his role is so much the good guy...and as everybody knows, good guys always die. Keep it comming!!!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on February 01, 2011
    Oooo! It is getting really exciting!
    I am really fond of the plot! I love how unique it is!
    I hope non of her boys die... I also hope that she survives this mission. I wonder if any Youtja show up? What would their reaction be to Connor?
    Is Connor telepathic/empathic or something along those lines... Could it be that being Albino is not the only reason why Youtja abandon their sucklings? Or Albinoism is a physical attribute to something else...
    Great story!
    Good luck!
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