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Reviews for Divide

By : kheavSarah
  • From ANON - Amanda on February 13, 2011
    hi.
    love the story a very different concept from what i am used to reading when it comes to fanfiction....i do have a question though..please tell me that little Connor Cross isnt going to hate his mother who raised him or worse not remember her
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  • From nera9999 on February 13, 2011
    Great story. Please more!!!!
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  • From chiken8mafechan on February 11, 2011
    jajajajajaja Lar´ja and Halkrath was it? or maybe Hulk and Lurk? jajajajajajaa thats just Cross comming back to life! yes! Oh Betanu Betanu...you really will have your work cut out for you! And at last! I knew she HAD to be part Yaut´ya! great story! very original! I want to see Connor soon! so you better continue!
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  • From CLTexas84 on February 11, 2011
    Oooo..very interesting ending..and I like chapters like this that are build-ups and fillers. Just wetting the appetite. Great job!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on February 11, 2011
    LMAO! Lark and Hulk! Brilliant!
    Great, now she has two Youtja on her tail. Big B has serious competition! lol! What's Conor's reaction going to be... O.o I'm starting to cackle at her situation, humans of all genders, youtjas, and who knows what else are attracted to her. Thinking back, I'm surprised the Xenomorphs haven't jumped her.
    The vulture comment is so true, I like hover over this fic... I almost refused to read anything else...
    Nice chap, good to see Kelly and Cross on good terms now! Loved the double smack/rub for PERCY...

    Good luck, awaiting the next chapter! *okay... that was a bit korny... "awaiting" lol! too lazy to change it though, so your stuck with it. XD *

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  • From ANON - Rev on February 11, 2011
    Aaaahh!!! What?! Oh oh oh oh oh oh Foursome!!!! XD Still dont get why they have to be her pretend mates but I will faithfully follow this story to find out!!
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  • From bloodravyn on February 11, 2011
    damn!
    loved, again!
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  • From ANON - YoungFireDove on February 10, 2011
    I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY AND HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON!!!!!! I JUST LOVE THIS AND PLEASE OH PLEASE HAVE CONNER(sp?) COME BACK PLLLLEEEEAAASSSSSEEE HE WAS THE CUTES LITTLE THING THAT I HAVE EVER READ SO PPPPPPLLLLLEEEEAAASSSSSEEEE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! ^^
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  • From CLTexas84 on February 10, 2011
    YAY! Thank you so much for your constant updating. I really appreciate it. So interesting to hear the full story of her clan..kinda freaky that every female dies after birth. Somehow I get the feeling Cross might be an exception LOL...great job once again.
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  • From ANON - Rev on February 10, 2011
    You know I love you right? XD
    I'm loving where it going, though you mixed past tense with present tense and it got a bit confusing on some parts. Other than that, aaaahhh!!! You updated!!!!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on February 10, 2011
    See, I told you I would like it!
    You threw a few twists in here, I like it! I suspected that she must have had a least some Youtja blood in here, either by nature taking its course, or by bioengineering. I found it really fasinating! With every chapter i'm pulled in even more!
    Its not all that surprising that Cross withdrew from everyone when Conor left... I hope she goes back to her old self soon, and that Kelly will be in it more often...

    I was waiting for this update, I was like a vulture circling this fic, it felt like every second i pressed refreash, and no update, that is until today! XD

    Good luck, I cannot wait for more!
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  • From bloodravyn on February 10, 2011
    so, i was right!
    she is part of them, too!
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  • From Werewolf2030 on February 10, 2011
    I love this story! I'm sad that Conner has to leave his mom, but excited that Betanu is his dad.
    And I was like O_O, Cross is part yautja. I don't like the General though. I love the story and can't wait for more.
    Will Betanu and Cross get together?
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  • From ANON - Rev on February 09, 2011
    OOOOOOOOOOH SNAP!!! Ha! That explains all the jumbo that made no sense in the earilier chapters. I was just summing it all to, Meh, it their story they can do what they want.......hey! Betanu lied!! That bastard!!!
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  • From CLTexas84 on February 09, 2011
    Holy crap!! It totally answered my first question...but now I have more! LOL! It's so sad she became the way she did from missing her boy. But this is going to be crazy!!! I cant wait to read more, and of course, what will happen when Betanu hears about it....come get ur woman LOL!

    Great job once again!
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