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Reviews for Divide

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  • From bloodravyn on April 11, 2011
    uh oh!
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  • From DagdothFliesh on March 16, 2011
    Another nice chapter! I'd been waiting for it for a while now :) Poor Cross, getting all flustered, but she got her payback, didn't she? Hahaha. I hope you get more out soon :)
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  • From ANON - Kyradda on March 16, 2011
    OMG this story is amazing!!! I am loving your writing style as well as your characters. I was sad about Constantine but now I just feel like he is going to thelrow a spaner in the works XP. Cross and Betanu just make me awww all o er the place... when I am not
    laughing my lungs out. Keep up the outstanding work and I can't
    wait for more.

    Your new fan Kyradda.
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  • From bloodravyn on March 16, 2011
    oooh, loved!
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  • From CLTexas84 on March 16, 2011
    YAY! So glad u updated this! Ive been waiting with bated breath. I think youre doing a great job. I guess I personally am not cut out to be a Beta Reader cuz I dont see any problems.

    Very excited to see what this arbitraitor will be up too, especially with connection to the General..
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on March 15, 2011
    *Claps hands gleefully*
    I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait. Update the story NOOOW, I wanna know whats gonna happen.... please!
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  • From nazgullover on March 05, 2011
    Love the story! It's really enjoyable to read and I just love Connor. Of course the play of emotions between Cross and Betanu is wonderful as well. It was funny when Cross realized she's part Yautja. Hope to hear from you soon. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Whitnee on February 16, 2011
    I just started this story today, and I am HOOKED!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!! I am gonna have anxiety checking everyday for an update lol!! looking forward to more!!!!!
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  • From pewpew on February 16, 2011
    Please find a beta reader! I mean that in the nicest way possible. I like the story idea and would love to see what you come up with in the future. I think you have a great concept and an ability to piece together a story. BUT it's in a shabby state with the technical and style issues. Basic spelling and grammar are important.

    Think of posting online as a first date. You want to put your best foot forward and let them discover your only human later, when they like you too much to care. :D
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on February 16, 2011
    ooo, Look at all excitment that has happened while i was away!
    Their BACK!!! Poor Conor has the couch! o.O lol!
    Big B's back!!! I'm glad that he still wants Cross, too bad he has too many hurdles to jump before he can have her, Oh what fun! I wonder what's going to happen to Lark and Hulk, I seem to grow Fond of all the Youtja males you create...
    Well i cannot wait to find out what happens!
    Good luck
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  • From bloodravyn on February 16, 2011
    woo-hoo!
    go Betanu!
    lol
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  • From CLTexas84 on February 15, 2011
    AHHH!!! Connor and Betanu are back! YAY!!! So great to see Betanu make his claim. Ive got a feeling Cross will be the exception to the rule as far as babies go. I cant wait to see what more goes on with Connor and how he'll react to everything, as well as the General. Im really glad Betanu didnt immediately give in to everything he wanted and is making her come to him and admit it to herself that this is what she wants. FANTASTIC JOB!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2011
    I have been reading this story. I like to give stories a chance. I think the bones of the story are pretty good, the idea is good. But please please get a beta. Things like "spur" rather than "spar" etc. just take a person right out of the story. I am not sure by reading if English is your first language, but if not there are people that will beta that are used to working with those that use English as a second language. I am sure all your readers would be even happier with the story if the wording and spelling were touched up.
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  • From CLTexas84 on February 14, 2011
    Ooooo..can wait to see who it is? Is it REALLY Connor..or could be a certain someone waiting to claim their mate? Hehe..awesome job
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  • From bloodravyn on February 13, 2011
    oh it would be wonderful if it was conner and betanu!
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