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Reviews for Divide

By : kheavSarah
  • From LadyOfDaGame on February 09, 2011
    XO Whaaaaaaat? he's Betanu's son? Really?....oh this sho nuff got interesting
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on February 09, 2011
    Aaaaw noooooo don't do that to Connor....it'd make a good story though
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on February 08, 2011
    Was I livin under a rock? Damn i can't believe I missed the update of this new chap glad ta see you keepin this baby goin i can't wait to learn how Connor turns out when he is grown
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  • From ANON - Rev on February 08, 2011
    .........I despise/love you. At least it was more than last time, but grrrr to you!!! I cant wait till your next update!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on February 08, 2011
    Okay, Do what you have to with Constantine, then hurry back with the Big B!!! *It almost seems like I don't like the guy, which by-the-way, I do, just not with Cross. He's everything a NORMAL woman would want in a man, Heck, I would want, but for cross... Not so much...*
    I really enjoyed this chapter! I nearly cried, the tears running down from my eyes don't count, I had somthing in it!
    So, How are you going to do this, write out a bit of what happens in the three years, or just hop to it... ta da... 3 years later! either way, I bet i'm going to like it!
    I cannot wait their return, or how you reintroduce Constantine...
    I'm Addicted to this story!
    Good luck!
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  • From spooksies on February 07, 2011
    who knew that 4 days without internet could cause a reading binge?

    BTW.....awesome chapters love!!
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  • From bloodravyn on February 07, 2011
    i DESPISE her father!
    he is such a cold hearted bastard!
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  • From CLTexas84 on February 07, 2011
    I hate that they're being torn apart, but Connor NEEDS to go. And Ill actually say thank you for no complete sex between them yet. The anticipation is awesome. Now Im SUPER DUPER curious about the General and Cross..are the REALLY 100% human? Curiosity is killing me, but I am so excited! Great job once again!
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  • From CLTexas84 on February 07, 2011
    WOW! I was wondering if there was going to be an introduction of chemistry between Cross and Betanu and you certainly lived up to my expectations!! I cant wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - CoCo on February 06, 2011
    Great story!!!! Can't stop reading! I love how you give details and your doing great at keeping my attention.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2011
    Hahaha, deleting reviews that are trying to point out where you need improvement? That's why you'll always produce sub-par writing, but you'll think that you are the best writer on Earth. Good fucking luck with that.
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  • From chiken8mafechan on February 06, 2011
    I love how you update quickly!!! Still wondering about Constantine, but I can't help it if I find that little bit of Xeno exiting!!!The General would have a field day with that one!! A Yaut'ya grandson and a Yaut'ya sortof son-in-law?? hahahah great!!!! How will Connor be received by others? and again... keep it comming!!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on February 06, 2011
    Oh my! So theres the reason behing the Big B's appearance on the planet. Poor Conor? *wipes tears from eyes* Poor little guy. He is very courageious though, standing up to Big B like that!
    Wonder if they are going to work out a deal pertaining to Conor and if he can visit or what not...

    So, FINALLY, the attraction to the big Youtja happened! Yay! wonder how that is going to turn out! (wiggles eyebrows* Who needs Constantine when you've got Big B there! really... I know it sounds insensitive, especially when she just lost him. This is a story about Cross and hopefully a Youtja... right? ;3

    Fantastic read!
    Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Rev on February 06, 2011
    Ooooooh......you suck! =P That was such a tease!
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  • From bloodravyn on February 06, 2011
    ooooh, is Cross maybe part Yauntja?
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