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Reviews for Divide

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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on August 01, 2011
    Yay!!! An update!!!!
    Regenerating hard meat! I like. Wonder who will make it a trophy?
    Black rage... nice new development... could cause problems in the future... muhahahaha!
    The elder's control has to be cut over Vor'metka.. Keeping him from doing his duty... that is a load of @#$@! Elder Bakuub (hope i spelled his name right)is awesome! He's a keeper, dont kill him off, Please!

    I am extremely happy that your still working on this story! I would go insane if you just dropped it... But once its done, I would go insane because there would be nothing to read... hmmm... I guess i will have to worry about it when i get there...
    anyway,
    good luck
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on July 28, 2011
    good stuff from you as always
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  • From ANON - Dark on June 20, 2011
    Amazing chapter as always! I'm actually curious on who she' ll eventually end up with...at the moment I'm kinda siding for the twins to have her, but then again Betanu would make an amazing mate
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  • From CLTexas84 on June 08, 2011
    Nice job. Im scared about this Emperor xenomorph and the possibilities of what can happen. Im also SUPER excited to hear Edwins tale and what exactly happened between him and his brother.

    Nicely done
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  • From CLTexas84 on June 07, 2011
    Whaaaat?! OMG First, we know how Constantine was murdered, not killed by the Xenos, and now..Vor’mekta is THE BROTHER OF THE GENERAL AND KILLED CONSTANTINE???!!! Wow.....lost for words..seriously!!
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  • From CLTexas84 on May 27, 2011
    Great job once again. So great to get a little bit of Guan's back story. I wondered how Cross would react to him and Im glad she didnt have the same reaction she did to Betanu. It will be interesting to read how he responds to her and Guans little outing. Soo scared about the cadets and what theyre doing..its gonna be BAD. I still wonder what it is her grandfather wants from her exactly...

    AWESOME JOB!!!
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  • From chiken8mafechan on May 07, 2011
    oh oh! At last we know something of what Nihkou’te wants of Cross.. although why he would go through with it...Im still guessing. I suppose politics are involved?
    I can't wait for Connor's rite of passage! and I thought Constantine was making some sort of comeback... Humm I wonder how that will go over Cross!!
    By the way!! Thank you for updating!! You stopped for a long time and so I stopped checking all the time.... Keep up the good work!!
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  • From CLTexas84 on May 05, 2011
    WOW...OMG..it just got CRAZY!! Her grandfather can pick her mate?! BOY OH BOY..and I wonder what the deal between her and Guan is in the feelings they automatically have with each other. Im surprised Betanu didnt tell her! So sad about her father and his mother, it really explains alot about how he is and how he is with her.

    BRAVO!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on April 29, 2011
    Awesome! I am in love with this story. Is that even possible?
    Keep up the great work! *hugs computer* Its torture waiting for the next chapter... >.
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on April 20, 2011
    Daaaaamn....was not expecting that oh well makes for a great chapter things just got spiced up. Although, I do have one question, her hormones or whatever shouldn't they be affecting how she feels towards other yautja males I mean I understand Connor and the two Elders thats she is related to and then there was that little thing her and Betanu had a while back but how come the twins aren't getting any attention?
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  • From ANON - mookfree on April 19, 2011
    omg i love this story its just like a soap? opera its getting better and better not to mention all the twist and turns the story plot is taking . I cant wait for the next Chapters :)
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  • From CLTexas84 on April 18, 2011
    Wow. This is getting seriously DEEP. Its really cool to see the General actually has a heart and cares for his daughter..GREAT JOB
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  • From bloodravyn on April 18, 2011
    no wonder the general hates the yuantja so freakin' much!
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on April 14, 2011
    Can I simply say that I loved it
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on April 11, 2011
    Wow! Amazing! It has been so long since I have read this! I love how this turned out! woot!
    Looks like there is going to be some trouble for Big B! I wonder what is going to happen next. I hope her grandfather is not up to something horrible. I wonder if he is thinking of breeding her. O.o
    Good luck!


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