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By : MuseofScrolls
  • From ANON - firefly on October 08, 2009
    another awsome chapter keep it up ^^
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  • From DeathGodDist on October 03, 2009
    Wow musey, simply WOW. It's been a long time, but it's always so very much worth it when you can bestow such wonderful writing upon us. Loved it from begining to end, there is just simply so much to enjoy. I love all the characters because they are all so unique, the innocent Lyra, the stoic O'ni, the crazed Ji'ran and the malevolant Bha'ruk. No one is alike and that just makes the story so much more fulfilling and diverse.

    Very intersting idea that Lyra's kind will die if they witness murder (I assume simple "death" isn't counted since they would obviously encounter it in some form or another). I wonder if Da'ar knows a way to reverse that since he's studied them so much. O'ni intrigues me a lot, he doesn't seem like a real bad guy, just someone who wants to obey, I wonder how he'll react to what just happened?

    So yeah, I was just floored by it all. I enjoyed reading it multiple times and noticing things I missed the first time, but that's the mark of a great story IMO. Bravo!

    -DGD
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  • From bloodravyn on September 24, 2009
    oh, wow!
    did she die, then?!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on September 24, 2009
    Great update Musey.

    I'm glad Da'ar arrived in time to stop Ji'ran from going any further. It will be interesting to see Bha'ruk's reaction to Lyra's state.

    I hope poor O'ni doesn't end up the same as Ji'ran. I hope Da'ar and Ta'al get the Lyra and the others out of there soon.

    Lots of hopes. XD
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  • From prairiefire on September 23, 2009
    Musey,

    Awesome chapter and good to know the creative juices are flowing again.


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  • From ginstar3 on March 21, 2009
    excellent story so far. things are definatly heating up. can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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  • From ANON - Helical on March 15, 2009
    Wow. You are an extremely skilled writer, this story is fantastic.
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  • From Vyper on November 05, 2008
    This is another really good Predator story. It is nice to see that the females are not human, but other aliens. It is a good change of pace. Thank you.
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  • From midnighteyes on June 14, 2008
    I hope there is an update!!!! This story is awesome and i'm glad your sharing it with us... Please update soon... Thanks

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  • From ANON - Bee on June 13, 2008
    wow I like this new dark Yauta. Maybe something will happen between him and Natra. I love this story and I'm so glad you updated!!
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  • From aquamum on June 08, 2008
    cool another chapter.
    I love him dreaming about "his Natra"
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  • From ANON - noneyowax on June 06, 2008
    I like this chapter, it made me extremely satisfied for some odd reason(question mark)Keep up the good work, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Firefly on June 05, 2008
    ohhhh the plot thickens this is getting all the better my dear and I look forward to reading more
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  • From ANON - amaria on June 05, 2008
    I'v never read a predator fic before and it's only now that I see what I'm missing out on!I love this fic and can't wait for you to update!
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  • From DeathGodDist on June 05, 2008
    Oh man, I am just so glad to see that you are still writing and continuing this story. I must say that I found this chapter to be extremely well thought out and kept me quite interested to say the least. I really am liking the way you are developing your characters and introducing new ones as well.

    I shall definitely be keeping a sharp eye out on this one and am looking forward to more down the line.

    -DGD
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