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Reviews for The Collection

By : MuseofScrolls
  • From Keen on August 29, 2007
    *does happy dance*

    Can’t wait to read more. I’m waiting to see what kind of trouble she’s found herself in and if there’s any hope of escape. Will mummy come to lay the smack down in search of her missing daughter or will ‘Mister Grab-em-tits’ help her put some distance between her and her new owner? And then there’s the matter of what she’ll have to do between now and escape, if she even can … so many, many possibilities. In any event, let me stop ramblin’ and tell you simply, great start.

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  • From on August 16, 2007
    Very intriguing first chapter. How dark are you going to take this? I am anxious to find out and will eb checking for more.
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  • From Deeplove on August 13, 2007
    Well this is different. I can only imagine what horrors await this female. I will be checking in for more. Good start
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  • From Airporter on August 11, 2007
    Good start. I look forward to reading more about the collection.
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  • From wydow on August 11, 2007
    I really like what you have so far. I am anxious to read more.
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  • From Shalimar on August 11, 2007
    Oh, you know it's going to be bad when one Yautja tells you that you, he and everyone else on board the ship you're on belongs to another Yautja. Bha’ruk must be a nasty SOB. I'm sure we'll see.
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  • From prairiefire on August 11, 2007
    Most impressive Musey.

    The information we are getting about Bha'ruk reminds me of the serial killer/collector Casanova from the movie/book "Kiss The Girls." The question is, what is going to happen to Lyra? She sounds like a strong woman and she won't break that easily. She'll give Bha'ruk something to think about.
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  • From Retribution on August 11, 2007
    I like this very much, it is different and full of mystery. I do hope you continue with it.

    Ar'Shiya
    The Death Warrior
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