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By : MuseofScrolls
  • From Shyann on June 04, 2008
    Than you for ending this torchore...
    Please post more soon.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on June 04, 2008
    Well it's about time! LOL, just kidding. You know that I would wait until the ends of time for an update. But now that one is here, I can review it. And I shall! Here goes...Um, yeah, what was I saying? I can't remember for the life of me. All I can see is some silly statue! LOL


    No seriously, that was great. I'm glad that Lyra is finally going to get some help. I can't wait to see Da'ar kick Bha'ruck's ass. And what is going on with Ji'ran? I totally did not see that coming at all! Great work and I can't wait to see more. =D
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  • From ANON - Bee on March 03, 2008
    I love this story.
    I hope that Bha'ruk doesn't mate with Natra. Maybe the emergence of the arbitrator in disguise, will help save Natra and maybe they will fall for each other?? It seems like nobody likes Bha'ruk's rule, even O'ni seemed like he felt bad for Natra.
    I can't believe that bastard cut her hair off?!? Hopefully her hair grows back fast.
    Have I mentioned yet that I love this story? :-)




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  • From ANON - OSR4Ever on February 19, 2008
    Really good, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From aquamum on February 18, 2008
    Cool, another chapter - it was good.
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  • From ANON - Shyann on February 14, 2008
    Wow this is great hope to see more asap...
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on February 14, 2008
    WHOOHOO!! I am SOSOSOSO excited!! I finally get to leave a review!!!


    OH...what should I say...hm, how about...I like the under lying theme that's here. Very different. And I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully, soon, someone will kick the shit out of Bah'ruk! He definitely deserves it! Waiting till the next update...
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  • From ANON - Firefly on February 14, 2008
    Great chapter, The elder got quite a surprise lol, please hurry and make the next chapter I look forward to see more
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  • From Retribution on September 24, 2007
    Musey, I am sorry that it took me so long to review chapter 2, but I was at a loss for words. The way you can create new creatures and make them seem so real is beyond me. This story is fantastic and I do hope you continue to add more of your wonderful creatures to it. So please update soon.

    Ar'Shiya
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  • From aquamum on September 22, 2007
    Hey great story - I hope he doesn't hurt her.
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  • From AngelofBlood on September 22, 2007
    this is really good so far I'm really looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From DeathGodDist on September 22, 2007
    Oho, what a very nice update. I'd normally just be thrilled with any update in this section now, but you went and made it very good too. :)

    Now we've met the elder Bah'ruk, and he's just as merciless as was built up. Clearly not a nice sort as none of the females he's taken have even slightly warmed up to him. Ta'al seems to be the only one on that ship with a conscience, but as he made clear, there's no way he could face up to Bah'ruk and survive.

    I like how original your characters are turning out to be. Lyra has a strong sense of pride and doesn't seem to be one who will be broken easily. The other captive aliens are also very unique in their experiences too. You've definitely got a good story going here, so hopefully you'll continue it, especially after that cliffhanger ending :)
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  • From JulieL on September 21, 2007
    I was so excited to see that you had updated Musey. I hope Ta'al can some how get Lyra or all of them away from Bha'ruk.

    Top stuff young lady.
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  • From AntiDolorifico on September 21, 2007
    As my interest in Predator stories slowly returns, I was happy to see this one updated. And you know of my dark streak, so hehehe.... I will be watching this one intently. =)
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  • From DeathGodDist on September 01, 2007
    Wow, this is an excellent opening chapter to a story. I really hope that you will continue on with it as the characters and situation are very interesting and complex. Kind of a nice change to not have an 'ooman' around and rather another alien race, makes it more original. Again, I look foward to future installments.

    I also really enjoyed your other story "What you never know..." and hope you'll continue that one someday too. :)
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