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Reviews for A New Alliance

By : Kehlan
  • From ANON - myst on November 21, 2016

    This was very satisfying on so many levels! Great matches, justice, drama, comic relief, great story! Loved it and sorry to see it end. I hope to see the wonderful George again, and his sons. And of course, Kehlan. Congrats on a story well done!


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  • From ANON - myst on November 20, 2016

    you may never see my reviews, but bravo. bravo.


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  • From ANON - Howdy on March 09, 2016
    AAAAAAAAaaaaaa! So excited to see that 1) you continued writing this and 2) you found a clever way to give Price the "what for". Cause seriously, fuck that guy. He 'gon learn today. Lol

    Thank you so much for sticking with it and updating! :D
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  • From ANON - Howdy on January 23, 2016
    Admittedly, I have to refresh my memory and reread some chapters... But I'm still reading, and still interested in where you're going with the story. I check for updates pretty often and I really enjoy your work. Don't be discouraged! :D
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on May 25, 2015
    Yay!! An update! I had been checking back and consoling myself that you said before that you would not abandon this story so I wouldn't think that's what happened! I completely understand, that pesky life getting in the way of more entertaining pursuits. I'm still loving the story, and I agree that the scene with Kiryende killing that officer bugs me too, but I really don't see another way that that could have gone down. You're right: diplomatic immunity, what could they do? I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Brandy on October 23, 2014
    No need to apologize. Don't want to ruin it for everyone else. :) As always, it was a wonderfully written chapter. I do hope that there will be more stories with these characters. I've grown quite attached to them.
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  • From ANON - Kopper on October 15, 2014
    Your story is amazing! I am slightly ashamed that it has taken me so long to review (been following since about Ch. 40).

    The way that you weave all of the cultures and characters together sends shivers down my spine, you do it so well. Thank you so very much for sharing your work.
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on October 12, 2014
    That was a great chapter. I love how you wrote it as she was remembering it in the shower. It was very well done. I ended up reading this chapter twice because I liked it so much! Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on September 29, 2014
    Ooh! So excited for an update! It's cruel to leave us hanging with Khetara and Kiryende, but I'm sure you know by now we're not going anywhere till the story's done! I am enjoying the depth you have to each of your characters, and leaving the choice on what to do in Kehlan's hands with that vague order! I can't wait to see what she does and to get back to Khetara and Kiryende. So excited! Keep it up, you're writing skills are amazing and I am greatly enjoying this story!
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on August 30, 2014
    Ooh! Things are getting even more intriguing! I was a little worried that you had stopped updating this story, but I kept checking back and now I'm so glad I did! I can't wait for the next chapter! (But I will, patiently!) :)
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  • From Brandy on August 25, 2014
    The story is almost done?? I hope that the sequel is just as good as this one. Keep up the amazing work.
    On a side note,thank you for not killing off George. I was really sad there for a minute.
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 30, 2014
    I'm simultaneously glad you have a plan worked out for how to wrap this story up and sad that it will be coming to an end. I have greatly enjoyed all of your updates, and I have to say that I wouldn't be too upset if your characters dragged this story out a good bit longer. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 21, 2014
    Yep, worth the wait! I'm glad to see they came through that mission with George still alive! I can't wait to find out more about this Jonathan Price business. It's very mysterious! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 11, 2014
    I love that Centanu called him George like that! Thanks for the heads up about how long it may be before the next chapter. Take your time, it's worth the wait! I'm (patiently) looking forward to the next chapter. Stay motivated, it'll come to you!
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 10, 2014
    No problem, just giving credit where it's due. This story has so many twists and turns, just when I think I know where it's going, everything changes! It's a very exciting read and I love how in depth you've gone with your characters and all the details in the story from both the Predator franchise and Star Trek. It's very easy to become immersed in this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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