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Reviews for A New Alliance

By : Kehlan
  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2013
    I like this chapter a lot . I like how Kehlan speaks up for the sentient creatures.
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  • From ANON - KellieSD on June 21, 2013
    Thanks for the update, I appreciate the time and effort you take to write each chapter. I look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - KellieSD on May 26, 2013
    I like where this is going. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - KellieSD on May 17, 2013
    I am enjoying your story, and looking forward forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on May 06, 2013
    Wow great chapter, looking forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on April 30, 2013
    So exciting, I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Thanks for tthe quick update.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on April 29, 2013
    Thank you for another interesting chapter.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on April 14, 2013
    Anoyher great chapter, Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on April 08, 2013
    Thanks for the update, I look forward to each new chapter.
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  • From Alleyway_Ravager on April 07, 2013
    This is pretty good. I have a feeling where the time travel stuff is heading but I will wait to see if I am right. I did feel that the death of security officer in chapter 10 was handled a little overwhelmingly. Felt like there should have been more "righteous anger" or something. over it on the part of the star fleet officers. I DO understand the need for the diplomatic process to go smoothly so the captains would move to calm everything down, but still feels a little weak in that regard.

    I like the cast of characters and the various aliens in the story. Feels very much like its source material.

    Also I was glad to see the Yajuta Elder knowing that his people would be defeated in a war with the Klingons and Star Fleet. A good, legitimate reason for them to negotiate. One thing that I noticed (and this is just me rambling, very rarely do I get the chance to talk about it with someone) is that the technology in the predator movies/comics/games always seemed static. Like they don't seem to make many improvements on what they had. Made me wonder if they stagnating technology-wise or if "oomans" where just advancing quicker than they did. I liked seeing your Yajuta captain showing his people know a thing or two about tech though.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on March 27, 2013
    I enjoy reading your story because it is so well written, and leaves me anxious for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on March 26, 2013
    Exciting chapter, I hope they both live. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - adventra on March 25, 2013
    It's great to see another post from you as I love your story.
    I hope you have plenty more to post as I am really enjoying it.

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  • From ANON - KellieD on March 25, 2013
    Lot's of twist & turns during the last two chapters, I like it. Please keep updating.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on March 20, 2013
    I really like your story ,please continue.
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