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Reviews for A New Alliance

By : Kehlan
  • From ANON - kapowallace on July 09, 2014
    I'm loving this fic! You have a lot of talent and it shows you've been working hard on this. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Brandy on June 14, 2014
    The fight scenes are very well done, just so you know.
    That last twist in the most recent chapter is definitely an eye-opener. I actually ended up almost spitting out my drink with a "whaaaaa?!?!?!" Keep up the hard work!!!
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  • From Brandy on May 23, 2014
    Keep up the good work! The suspense is killing me, but I like it. :)
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  • From Brandy on May 05, 2014
    Woo! I got a 4 chapter update this time around :)
    I like how you're drawing out them starting the hunt, and also giving insight to the Queen's thoughts. Keep up the good work!
    also, beware the terrifying knitting!!! lol (I thought that was the best joke ^_^)
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  • From BurneHazard on April 29, 2014
    I've been quite an avid follower of this story since about chapter...well, it was in the teens I think when I first started to read. Like many on this site, I'm a shadow on the wall. I read when I have time and rarely leave a comment. That really should change. I was absent for a month or so and thus had a lot of reading to catch up on. Being back in college also cuts into my recreational relaxation time. I saw what happened and I can't tell you how glad I am that you are continuing this story. Having tried my hand at writing as well, I know how frustrating it is to have AFF.net decree something as it has happened with a couple of my stories as well when there was no problem with non-story related intros a few years ago. That along with lack of any interest expressed in reviews has caused several of my stories to just die off. Without feedback, the spark of creativity just dies. So, my apologies in being remiss and doing as everyone else has done.

    I love this story. While I'm not a huge hang-on follower of Predator, I have taken interest in them through the past years enough to have a pretty decent grasp on their culture and whatnot. And I can tell you this from what I have learned and what I have read in other fanfictions: people who say your yautja are too soft? They've only watched the movies. People who say your yautja are bullies? Never read the lore or comics around them. People who say they're not cannon? Elitists--better off ignored and deleted. You can never satisfy them, and you'll find they RARELY EVER write stuff themselves to back up their b*tch fests.

    I have enjoyed this fiction and continue to look forward to each new chapter. I'm a HUGE Trekkie. Aside from a few confusing matters that might be due to my distance from having watched any seasons for years, I've found nothing wrong with any terms, races, etc. You've been utterly creative and paired both genres magnificently. If people are gonna complain, then they had better put their money where their mouths are and WRITE THEIR OWN! Until they do, they're whistling in the wind.

    Looking forward to the next chapter hun!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2014
    Another marvelous chapter, and I'm going to be waiting patiently to see how this unfolds. I shudder to even think of what will be required to capture a queen, although I think you just upped the ante on "interesting."

    The Matriarch has certainly set the stage for what might be the greatest hunt ever. What's always intriguing is the Yautja practice of nurturing intelligent life when they find it. Granted, intelligent prey makes for a better hunt, but the practice makes our own drive for self-extinction even more ludicrous.
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  • From ANON - Brandy on April 16, 2014
    I love it! I got to read two more chapters already. I can't wait to see how they're going to get the planet cleaned out, and capture the queen. I'm already biting my nails. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2014
    The call from the Matriarch is definitely one of those things I'd define as "interesting" in much the same vein as Kehlan would define it. I did love the inadvertent flirting, too. I've always enjoyed Klingon culture, and I especially enjoy the way you bring in the small details that resonate so well. It allows me to lose myself in the chapter, and in the story.

    And thank you for the kind mention! I'm happy if I was able to offer encouragement, and I'm glad you're continuing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2014
    It's not often that I can say that my work here as a moderator brings me into contact with a story that just takes my breath away. I read so many stories every week, and they start to blur after a time. But I was fortunate enough to have to review this story, hot on the heels of a grueling stint in another subdomain where I fear the well written stories are far outnumbered.

    This was a drink of cool water, an intelligent, well-written story that didn't exist simply to toss two improbable people into bed. It is thoughtful, and the characters are extremely well developed, showing growth as the story progresses. The Yautja lose none of their intrinsic menace, and your knowledge of Klingon culture is superb. As someone who pleaded for a later bedtime on Star Trek nights when the original series first aired (Yes, I AM that old), and who has continued to love the wonderful universe Gene Roddenberry gave us, I have to applaud this singular and marvelous story. I deeply regret not having come across it sooner, or I would have been reviewing all along.

    As a writer, I know the frustration of not getting any sense of how your story is being received. It's unfortunate that so many of us don't take the time to review, and I'll admit to being guilty of that as well. I can't review from my "working" account, and I'm so seldom in my personal account, but I could and should bookmark stories to return to, and to review.

    Obviously, it's your choice whether or not you continue to share this story. I will just say that I would greatly enjoy seeing what you have in store. But however you decide, let me just say thank you for restoring my faith with this superb work.
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  • From ANON - Brandy on April 13, 2014
    Kehlan,
    I saw that you might decide to quit posting for your work. I really hope that you don't. It's refreshing to not have smut in some of the stories that I read, and the grammar and english being used properly is a large plus. I have been following your story since around chapter 15, and love the crossover between Star Trek and Pretadors. It's a new take on things, and actually kind of reminds me of the Voyager series (my favorite, in part due to the amount of non-humans on board). I have tried to post a few times on here, to encourage and cheer you on, but posting from a not so smart phone apparently will not let them go through. So I hope that you do keep updating, because I have been waiting with bated breath for every chapter since i found this marvelous piece of work. I know that one positive in a sea of negative might not change your mind, but I hope that it at least puts a smile on your face :) happy writing, whether on here or just for your own enjoyment.
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  • From ANON - KellieD on April 06, 2014
    I am happy that you are are still updating your story. I look forward to each new chapter, and I find it amusing to see my name used in your story. Thank You!
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  • From ANON - KellieSD on August 21, 2013
    I really liked this last chapter a lot, George and Kaylan have a good friendship. I appreciate your writing style, which makes your story an easy an enjoyable read.
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  • From ANON - KellieSD on August 14, 2013
    Back from vacation, and I see two new chapters Thanks!
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  • From ANON - KellieSD on July 25, 2013
    Wow what a quick update, thanks.
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  • From ANON - jadedkyaria on July 23, 2013
    Love the story! I've been cheking back almost daily to see if you've updated. Please keep it up!
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