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schedule
March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed reading it.
schedule
July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story...great idea, but I have a couple of small criticisms...... 1) Dom wouldn't act that emotional, even if he'd been away for a while and was happy to see everyone again.... & 2) You need to work on your spelling and grammar a little bit more... Other than that, good job and keep up the good work!
schedule
January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, 30 chapters.......
schedule
March 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job on this story. I really enjoyed it.
schedule
October 18, 2002 at 12:00 AM
More Please!!!!!