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for The Flames Which Consume Us

by angedelamusique

person Shadoe SIRII Solaris Austere
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Why must you stop???!!! Please, I beg of you. CONTINUE!!!!!!!! Or I might have a worse fate than the Phantom!
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
kk--well, i have updated! yay, go me! lol, as for a beta, still have none yet so therefore it is in my own version of editing(which is rather barbaric in means). i hope this format helps those of you who had a hard time reading one HUGE paragraph. lol. i
person spikesbint
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Hi angelmarie, I would like to offer my services at a beta for your work, if you still have no one email me at the above address and I would be happy to help you.

Angela
person Skimbleshanks
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*Applauds!!!*
Wonderful! So romantic too!

Luv Skimbleshanks!
xxxMwahxxx
person angelgirl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Such a poetic ending! I love this!
person Phantom\'s Christine
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH! I loved it. it was great!
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Oaky I finally got my account back up. My tard ass forgot my user name and password.

I put up two of my ficcies for now. One is a joke, and the other is a Spuffy fic.

Anyhoo, I talka to ya later!!!

Squishees!! And Huggles!!!

Now back to our l
person Kristine
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
::happy sigh:: Ahh, if only that happened...I would've died a happy woman...::purrrrrrrr::
I admit, I've only read a handful, literally, of POTO fiction, but I must say how much I'm loving this one right now!! Well-written, not ridiculously graphic
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Hey girlie!

You still need to seperate the paragraphs and capatalize the letters at the beginning of sentences.

Oh and one more thing, please update... slap*! And longer chapters.... Is Spikesbint helping ya so far? If not, I can help ya if ya want.
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
yea, yea, ok, well, I know I have to update. I will, I promise! but it will only be part of the story b/c I don't have it finished yet. lol. I'm working on it, really. As for Spikesbint, yea, they have helped me immensely. I just am not at home right no

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