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Reviews for Falling Down

By : myrana
  • From ANON - mrsfourth on January 29, 2013
    This is great! I hope you're still out there,and planning on updating someday soon!
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  • From lillyput93 on September 18, 2011
    I can't wait to find out what is going on!!! Usually I can take a guess and be close to the truth but you have definitely kept your cards close to your chest! Please write more before I go insane!
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  • From butabara on October 11, 2010
    awesome, really hope to see more!
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  • From TunesonaTuesday on February 02, 2010
    I just love this story. I want to see more of how Jareth reacts to seeing Sarah again!

    I hate to be one of those people that constantly pesters for updates, but I want to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Lioness on November 05, 2009
    I am REALLY enjoying this story! You must write more! I can't wait to see what happens! :D
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 12, 2009
    Huury up and update!!! cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - bella on July 06, 2009
    i absolutly love this story, i really like the way you've portrayed sarah and i cant wait to find out whats going on with this guy and whats going to happen with jareth!
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  • From bonnyblonde on July 05, 2009
    You capture Jareth quite beautifully...I can almost hear this voice in my head when I read your dialogue. I'm very intrigued, please go on!
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  • From Ficfan3484 on July 05, 2009
    I like adult Sarah much better than the one in the movie. I think this is a really good story.
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  • From Kip on July 03, 2009
    Very intriguing, more please! 'Purr
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  • From Ficfan3484 on July 02, 2009
    Interesting story, I think it's good. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From bonnyblonde on July 01, 2009
    I'm enjoying this so much! I think the new villian is a brilliant addition - let's see what Jareth does with that. Keep it going!
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  • From ANON - JC on January 15, 2009
    I really, really, Really like this! I love that there is plot to it, not just smut. Please have more soon!!!!

    I love all the literary usage... :D Great!

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  • From cukid9 on December 05, 2008
    I'm really enjoying this story so far. I think what makes this story so different from the others here is that you've managed to write four excellent chapters without Jareth appearing. And, instead of just wishing he would pop up, I find myself more interested in Sarah's thoughts about her past experience in the Underground. It's amazing how just the threat (or promise, I guess ;) ) of the Goblin King is enough.

    I love Holly, by the way. I like that she's smart, funny, and has a no-nonsense attitude. And, yeah, I totally want to know who this guy is! At the beginning of the last chapter, when you mentioned something about Jareth changing the way he does things, I began to fear that you would do something radically different - such as having there be no Jareth anymore and this new guy being his successor. Though it would be an interesting twist, I have to admit that a Labyrinth fanfic without the infamous Goblin King would break my heart :)

    I'm loving what you've written so far and am going to keep an eye out for your next update!

    ~cu-kid
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  • From FlionndaWall on November 12, 2008
    Very well written! I can't wait to read more!
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