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Reviews for Falling Down

By : myrana
  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2008
    I think it's interesting so far.
    When will you post again?
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  • From ANON - Emciel on October 17, 2008
    I'm very impressed with what you've written of this story so far. It's definitely shaping up to be a really incredible sequel to Labyrinth, and I'm looking forward to more chapters come out soon. I don't want to be waiting in suspense much longer!! You've managed to create a very good characterization of Sarah, too. She's still headstrong, smart, but not completely perfect. I also like how you don't depict her as whiny or completely hung up on Jareth after all this time. If Jareth and Sarah are to come together, I would hope it's because they fall for who the other is as a person now, and not the ideal they have of each other from when Sarah first ran the Labyrinth!
    Hope to see more chapters soon!
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  • From ANON - jenny on October 11, 2008
    I cant wait till the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Norehnka on October 06, 2008
    Oh, i wonder who this strange man is... o_0' (And yeah, Jareth is coming!! Wouhou!) I really love the way Sarah had to make her way to the underground, it changes from the mirror or the calling and theusual confrontation that comes with it ^^
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  • From ANON - aysuh on October 05, 2008
    I loooovveee your story!^^ :D Your writing style is impressive and addictive!^^ You really capture Sarah's personnality (in what I can say). The parallele you made with Antigone is a really good idea. I've had to study one version of the play in my litterature class and I can see why you used it!^^ (don't know why, but maybe it appeal more to me for that!^^)

    I'll be checking on this story!:D I'm really eager to see Jareth!^^
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  • From ANON - Norehnka on October 05, 2008
    Nice story, i really like how Sarah's personality is describe and the way you situated her in her life ^^ You have great writing skills and i can't wait to read more of it!^^
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