Reviews for Memories in Time

BY : GBsAngel


  • From ANON - Laila on November 30, -0001

    Why did you stop? It's so beautiful!!!! Please continue!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - FunkyPixieChick on November 30, -0001

    This is such a cool story, aren't you ever going to update it? I want to read what happens next!

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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 30, -0001

    You will be continuing this story, yes? You've got a great premise, and sexual tension even if they wanted to fight against it.... Thus... More, please?

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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 30, -0001

    Bloody hell... Erik... what does one do with a woman that attracts one, especially when you've tied them to a bed? Just walk away? Must get to next chapter....

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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 30, -0001

    Kermurphel...The sound one makes when they stumble across a really good seduction scene and the Coke goes up their nose!!!!

    She has to escape... but, why??? Why leave that hotness that is the Phantom of this universe????

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  • From ANON - Larissa on November 30, -0001

    Great story! So original! Please, keep it up!


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  • From ANON - Killian on November 30, -0001

    I love your story! The idea is great and your writing is exellent. Don't you dare stop!

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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on November 30, -0001

    Chapter 5

    Nice chapter. Another suggestion. Victoria seems a bit subdued in this chapter which I thought might be a bit uncharacteristic. I'd have thought that she would be planning an escape of some sort away from Erik especially if she is so afra

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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on November 30, -0001

    Chapter 4

    It's me again. I just wanted to say "Pardonez-moi!" I used the name Virginia in my last review when I meant Victoria. So sorry!
    This gives me a chance to make one more suggestion. When Erik sees her in her underwear, you might want to

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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on November 30, -0001

    Chapter 4

    I'm back! :) Sorry for the delay but I was gone for awhile and had mucho many things to catch up on. You updated! Not once but twice. Yeah!
    This chapter is really good! I like hearing it from Erik's point of view. My only criticism,

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  • From ANON - hellena Angelique on November 30, -0001

    there's only one that that really bugged me and that's the fact that erik's mask is suppossed to cover the right side of his face not the left. other than that i love it so far. keep up the good work. May 3 Phantom DVD comes out!!!!!! yaaaaaaayyyyyness

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  • From ANON - alexandra on November 30, -0001

    Very good beginning! Please say you will continue?

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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on November 30, -0001

    I like the changes you've done to Erik. You're defintely capturing his darker qualities.
    Just a few suggestions. He was holding her arms pinned down the one moment and the next she was raking them through his hair. That part seemed to jump a bit.


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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on November 30, -0001

    I think your story is good so far. Definitely would like to read more.
    You may want to ellaborate a bit more in your descriptions. The second chapter was great and I love the idea but it also seemed a bit rushed from the point of when Erik saw her to w

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