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Reviews for Freedom's Slave

By : Aithilin
  • From ANON - ShadowSpirit on August 03, 2003
    It wasn't a bad chapter! Jack nearly cried, that's worth it! XD I mean.....man... x_X I'm good at wishing angst upon characters....but I feel so bad for him....Kwee ^^ Ana and Will flashback! *-* ::Mumbles how being nocturnal really raising 'hyper' attitude or 'fic angst' attitudes.:: o.O;;

    Ah.....I don't write for either of those....Just about all my fics are for Yu-Gi-Oh. Rather good show - in Japanese anyway. ::Glares and starts fires and stabs the dubbed version until nothing is left.
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  • From ANON - cneko on August 03, 2003
    Hrrmmm...let's see...where to begin....Well, first off, congrats. You write probably some of the best PotC slash stories that are out there IMHO. ^_^ I simply adored your 'Coming Along' fic, although I did think the writing style in that was a bit too simplistic at times. However, your style has definately improved over the course of your fics. Actually, I'm quite enjoying it in this one. Simplistic, yet still detailed enough to keep it engaging and generally well kept in character. ^_^ BTW, I like the much inclusion of the Parrot as the second main source of annoyment. (the first being Jack, of course.)

    One thing I must give you major major kudos on. You write slash and you don't make Elizabeth the Bitch Queen from Hell who maliciously stands in the way of Jack and Will's destined love! Gahd. That's my major peeve when it comes to slash and I've only found one other author besides yourself who writes PotC slash and doesn't do that. Elizabeth is one of my heroes now, so yay for you for not making her Eliz-bitch. ^_^ Same goes for your treatment of Ana. Whom I also adore the way you write her character.

    Umm...so, this is very long and is excessive with the smilies. Perhapes I should come up with something helpful now....Well, perhapes you could add a bit more detail to your action paragraphs? *goes out on a limb* Err...well, and I do know how you hate this but, well....keep up the good work and I look forward to future chapters and fics. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 03, 2003
    YAY! an update uberly fast! You don't want me to suffer! YAY!!

    I like my jelly bellies... don't take them away.. I have a whole other bag... yummy jelly bellies... would you like more?

    now, onto the review!!

    I liked this chapter, we already had a basic idea of what happened from the first chapter, this just confirmed and elaborated on it. Poor Bill :( We will miss him.

    And! we got a hint that Bill was getting ready to tell Jack about Will and Will's mom (sorry, can't remember the name you gave her) Well.. he did kinda tell him about Will's mom.. anywho.

    I can't wait to find out about Ana and Will's past.. they be the ones I'm impatientlytingting for!

    Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 03, 2003
    Ummm well duh! You better believe I will sweetie! Great Chapter! Very effective! Wanna know what I mean. It's on it's way! ;-)
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  • From ANON - ShadowSpirit on August 02, 2003
    *Blink blink* Wonder why Ana owes Will....hn.......and yeah, having a flashback in its own chapter is a good idea ^^ Speaking of flashbacks.... ::Stares at one of her fics.:: Meh....gotta go work on that... ::Shuffles off.:: Hey, if you like anime slash (which I donno if you do o.O;; but still XD) you should check over 'ShadowSpirit' on FFN XD *sweatdrops* Yeah...anyway...X_x
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  • From ANON - Insana Pineapple from Naboo on August 02, 2003
    I don't usually read AU, but you're other story showed you had enough talent to write quite a bit under Pirates the Caribbean. I like the way you have Anamaria overprotective of Will. Will probably wishes the Black Pearlisheishes him off the first time since the slavers came across him. I would expect they were particulary abusive against the yong lad, but if that wso hso he would be withdrawn from anything living. Oh well, its not like I'm complaining. If I wanted abusive stories, I have plenty of those under Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter. Good start and I'll be looking foward to more in the future from you.

    Ja ne,
    ~Insane Pineapple from Naboo
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 02, 2003
    you do like making me suffer! *cries*

    and now, I think you're doing it intentionally...

    'twas a good but though! Can't wait for the flashback!
    let's see.. Will helped Ana with something... so she keeps an eye on him.. I hope she does that not only because she feels obligated, but cuz they're friends too. Friends are good things.

    will we be able to sing Jack and Bill sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G soon?

    and while I'm thining about it, why do I keep eatbanabanana jelly bellies? they are nasty... as is the cocnut... and the pina colada.. (omg, a college student not liking a pina-colada! I can't hel... ... it's icky...)

    ok, I'm done with my rant... sorry bout it.. but I was typing and it just came out and now I'm too lazy to go and delete it..

    *sigh*

    what was I talking about? Oh! the story!

    update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on August 02, 2003
    YES! I've been sitting here, refreshing (like usual) and I was so hoping this refresh would be the time a new chapter showed up. And it was! Yay. Yeah, it was kinda short, but I'll take whatever I can get. Looking forward to see what's gunna take place in the flashback, but then again... I'm looking forward to just about anything. ^_^ Hehehe. Can't wait for another chapter! Keep up the /fantastic/ work!!!
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  • From on August 02, 2003
    Good story so far. I'm glad yre wre writing this.
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  • From ANON - GypsyJ on August 02, 2003
    This is really good-- quite an inneresting AU. Keep it going ASAP!
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  • From ANON - SwordsNSparrow on August 01, 2003
    It was really good! I liked it, so keep up the good work. You're doing a great job, and the story's interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Sandrine Black on August 01, 2003
    ^_^ Ooo, very good chapter. Much likey. I really like how you have Will have scars on his back. *grins* Can't wait to hear more about them *grins some more*. Hehehe. I also really like how you have Ana in this story too, and how you put her in. She's all Will protective. Cute! /Definitely/ can't wati for more. Keep up the FANTASTIC work, like usual!!

    ^_^ LOVE this fic so far!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Christine C on August 01, 2003
    Huzzah!! the AU you mentioned!!

    glad to see it!

    and *sigh* who doesn't love a good slave ficcie? although the "slave" part ended rather quickly. . .

    I eagerly await more ^_^
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 01, 2003
    I think you enjoy making us suffer :p

    but at least you update fast!

    we'll find out more about how Ana and Will met, yes? and about the scars Will has? Well, he is a slave.. so the scars make sense, but I still wanna know more!

    update soon please!
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  • From ANON - ShadowSpirit on August 01, 2003
    Shortness doesn't bother me 'cause I know your style of updating. I like Jack ^^ Ah....but then again I always like Jack....he's so cute for a pirate ^^ Well maybe cute isn't the word but...ok, yet it is the word. I hope Ana learns to trust Jack...same with Will and hopefully Jack doesn't do anything stupid to make it so that doesn't happen -___-;;
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