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By : pewpew
  • From ANON - Vegemite is a Vitamin on September 01, 2016

    This is a bloody awesome story, mate! One of the best I've come across.

    I'm surprised it's not on Archive, I reckon it'd get a lot more traffic there.

    Are there any plans for future chapters?


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  • From ANON - Sagikamikazi on December 15, 2015
    Yeah, so for sure, update plz!! I've fallen hooked and I can't let up! Sooooo.... Waiting! :)
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  • From ANON - Sagikamikazi on December 15, 2015
    Haven't been on in forever. Reading fics again is awsome. Thanks for this chapter, I WAS DYING FOR THEM TO FINALLY GET THERE! :)


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  • From ANON - Shyann on December 08, 2015
    When are we going to get more of this...Post more soon...
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  • From ANON - Fredrick on October 28, 2015
    It is so good to see this story is back again, definitely one of the best predator stories I've ever read. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Shyann on October 11, 2015
    Your Very Welcome....Please post more soon....Can't get enough..
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  • From ANON - Shyann on October 09, 2015
    Wow...So glad to see this is updated..
    Was a lurker for so long..Coming out the shadows...More asap please...
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  • From ANON - Tatyana Gordon on March 28, 2015
    I so wish there was more of this and even though it has most likely been abandoned by its writer, it will always hold a place as my favorite story in its entire section, maybe even the whole site.
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  • From ANON - Siya on April 15, 2014
    Wow! I love reading this story, it is well written I have read through it a couple times :) If you could update ASAP I known its been a while but I need to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - julie on March 13, 2014
    OMG!! I love this story!! Please continue it!! I know its been a long time since you updated but please this story is fantastic!!! Please let me know if you have updated on another site or something!!!
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  • From Gunner-Death-Dealer on July 06, 2012
    Can't wait for the next chapter
    I love how you got the last chapter
    You need to make a roleplayer.me account with two of the predators
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  • From ANON - LittlexJellicle on March 08, 2012
    What is going to happen next?!
    aww there making procuss
    hopefully she keeps him as a mate when
    the elder comes back
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  • From ANON - sherry on March 04, 2012
    Really miss this story...Don't find good one's like this often..Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2012
    Wow
    Can't wait for the next chapters!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2011
    I love this story! I hope you update soon please!
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