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By : pewpew
  • From hawthorne on July 16, 2010
    ch 10... glad to see an update and drove right in! this was an interestin chappy with all the formality and intrigue.. i look forward to part 2
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  • From DeathGodDist on July 15, 2010
    I just love how complex things are, even for such a simple thing as a, hehe, "formal banquet". I can't even begin to imagine how the normal gatherings are done if random fights, challenges and upbraidings are the norm. I also enjoy how you are still introducing new characters (interesting for Amelia to find someone new who can speak her language well) and continuing to flesh out details with others (continuing the hintings at Co'vo). And of course, I still found the humor, such as the remark about the "nice skull" on her chair, and some other remarks of Amelia's that she wisely keeps to herself. :)

    As always, will be eagerly awaiting what happens next.
    -DGD
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  • From girlyhero on July 14, 2010
    For just a formal dinner, that whole scenario was intense. I was on the edge of my seat, as to say. Awesome work! Can't wait to read more ^^
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  • From ANON - cricket on July 14, 2010
    *creeps around the corner* That's right Pew I am stalking you ONCE MORE! MWAHAHA *giggles at her own bad joke*
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  • From ANON - cricket on July 09, 2010
    I can't wait for "one more" chapter, teehee
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  • From DeathGodDist on June 22, 2010
    The story is still just simply amazing. I love all the new developments and characters you are continuing to introduce. All the back story you are filling is really is adding to the depth of things. And of course, the continuing relationship developments (and smut) are always very much welcome indeed. :)

    With all these new developments there are so many things I'm looking forward to reading about how they're going to turn out. I don't think there will be a chapter that will ever be boring from you at all. Oh, and I didn't notice any problems in the quality with the recent chapter, it was totally fine when I read it.

    Great job as always!
    -DGD
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  • From Genjibunbun on June 13, 2010
    Oh, why must there be 3 chapters and no humping? Lol, yes, I know it doesn't work with the story. I admit it, I am a real big fan of this fanfic, which is why I will sit twiddling my thumbs while I wait for a new chapter.
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  • From Genjibunbun on June 13, 2010
    I love Raz'ha, I really do. Amelia really needs to stop fighting it. XD

    I really am enjoying your story, your writing style is obviously finely tuned. I see almost no errors whatsoever. It's been a joy reading so far.
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  • From Genjibunbun on June 13, 2010
    Oh, fantastic! I'm slighty envious of miss Amelia.
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  • From Genjibunbun on June 13, 2010
    I have to say, I passed over this story a couple times. But, I am glad I finally started reading it. It is wonderful so far.
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  • From hawthorne on June 07, 2010
    8... good chappy... the fightingh... and the whole period drama was fun... and than the end... the plot thickens
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  • From ichigokage on June 06, 2010
    I am loving each and every naughty/sweet bit your story has to offer! And thank you for reviewing my Predator story! :D

    Can't wait for more naughtiness!!! ^o^
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  • From ANON - Unspoken Lore on June 03, 2010
    Yay another chapter! I do like the possibility of Amelia and Raz'ha hooking up. Their relationship is becoming innocent, yet amusingly awkward! I want to see more Amelia and Raz'ha action!! Anything will do! lol
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  • From DeathGodDist on June 02, 2010
    Once again, amazingly well written and everything. The characters and their interactions are just so endearing, you've really wrote them so well. I loved the soda can thing too, that was yet another humorous tangent of yours, but undeniably funny. And the puppies are indeed cute, and the way you are so descriptive with their mannerisms and actions only makes them more so, especially the alien puppy too :)

    I can see their concern though, it's probably like how most people view baby bears ("teddy bears") as the cutest things as can be, but when they grow to adults, well, yeah, usually bad things happen trying to be friendly with an adult bear. Hopefully the Hound becomes a great guard dog.

    Poor Rah'za still not getting any, got to admire his perseverance. But I guess he'll have him to himself for a while in just a little bit of time. Amelia with him on his own ship should make for a very interesting setting. Can't wait to see what occurs!

    -DGD
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  • From hawthorne on June 01, 2010
    ahhhhhh I love the names ofcourse! (im a big fan of norse mythology- actually im pagan and my primary God in Ullr and my Goddess Freya)
    I hope the injuried puppy's leg heals eventually

    it was a fun chapy to read even without sex... the soda can was a funny bit...
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