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By : pewpew
  • From torturequeen06 on May 14, 2010
    Very good chapter. I loved it. I'm enjoying the awkward interactions between Amelia and Raz'ha and I hope to be seeing more of that. Can't wait to see her reaction to the puppies. And, also, I loved your last chapter as well, just forgot to review it. I hope to be reading more soon. Great job and good luck with the future chapters. Oh, and I'm very excited about the Predators movie coming out.
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  • From DeathGodDist on May 11, 2010
    Still greatly enjoying this story very much. I love how you're putting in so many details with the Raz'ha trying to figure out things about Amelia and how to get her to like him. The poor guy hasn't got a clue, which makes for some hilarious misunderstandings and such. Other than that, your writing style is still incredibly hot and I will be eagerly awaiting what situations you'll put these three through next. :)

    -DGD
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  • From ANON - aquamum on April 28, 2010
    A.W.E.S.O.M.E. !!!!!
    I've just finished the first three chapters and I think this story is just awesome.
    I look forward to more.

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  • From DeathGodDist on April 22, 2010
    Wow, this is an awesome fic. I especially like how you have no qualms about diving head first right into the smut (well, relatively speaking compared to most stories. But still allowing for some great buildup), yet the writing is constant in its quality (ie. awesome). I also like how you're filling in the back-story as you go forward rather than simply moving in a constant straight line. It also is unique that you began the story with the girl already living with the Preds, as opposed to the typical narration of starting off with that not being the case and having to spend time getting to that point, which no doubt helps with getting the smut out quickly. Certainly not a bad thing at all. :)

    This is a great story and I cannot wait to see where you will take things from here. I mean, you started things off (again relatively speaking) with a threesome (something I believe more authors should have in their stories :D), so I can't wait to see what more you'll have in store. :D
    -DGD
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  • From hawthorne on April 20, 2010
    very sexy... your 3 main characters are very interesting... their relationship very involved... you had me on the edge of my seat in ch3 b/c i cared so much!
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  • From ANON - Panpriestess on April 08, 2010
    Very nice. Good flow. I like that you are inserting back story a bit at a time. Good visual imagery as well.
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  • From DeucesAreWild on April 04, 2010
    i forgot to add this was a great start keep it up
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  • From ANON - DeucesAreWild on April 04, 2010
    good job and its pauk not phauk. i cant wait for the next chapter, update soon.
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  • From memellowchick on April 02, 2010
    WOW you have a great start! I llove how you are portraying your characters
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  • From ANON - Neophylate on April 02, 2010
    Awesome story so far, loved the second chapter. Does the anal tag mean yautja-human?
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  • From torturequeen06 on April 01, 2010
    I think you have a good start here. Would like to read more soon. Great job and good luck with the chapters to come.
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  • From ANON - panpriestess on March 30, 2010
    A good start. I would like more back story. Hope you write more.
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