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By : bonnyblonde
  • From ElenaPajaro91 on February 03, 2009
    SHE'S BACK! And Barbossa seems, um...what's the word? Heartbroken, maybe? idk. How did Barbossa turn undead in the moonlight? He was just immortal, not undead... or is that an untold secret about him that we haven't learned in the story yet? What was running thru Lizzie's mind when she saw and heard everything in the cave?

    VERY GOOD CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT FER THE NEXT ONE! KEEP 'EM COMIN'!
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  • From lfuller711 on January 30, 2009
    I'm really enjoying your story - WANT MORE!

    I keep trying to see in my mind's eye what Barbossa would look like in modern dress, etc. I haven't quite gotten the picture yet - but it sure is fun trying. Maybe if I try without his modern clothing ( or any? )- something Quillish, but with a somewhat different face?

    Anyhow, please post more soon! I keep checking back everyday!

    I like how you are capturing Elizabeth, including her straight forwardness and the fact that she always trying to prove herself, to herself and everyone around her. She keeps awkwardly trying her independence.

    thanks!

    Lynne
    Las Vegas, NV
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  • From faeriquene on January 22, 2009
    Ah, the plot thickens yet again! I'm quite intrigued by these mysterious villains of yours, and must wonder if they are someone from the PotC universe, reborn or still around. Most of the major players are already accounted for, but if it's someone who has an interest in the Pearl...perhaps Davy Jones? Beckett or his modern equivalent? Hmmm....just pondering out loud here, and eagerly anticipating answers in future chapters! :-)
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  • From oliversangel on January 22, 2009
    Uh-oh. The trouble is starting. I can't wait. This story is getting......very seat of your pants...LOL. I loved Jack's reaction to their kiss. Gagging, and wanting to poke his eyes out with a stick, that was funny, and very Jack. ^.^ Ahh Miss Beth, you assert yourself girl!! Don' take crap from no one!! You don't need protection!! I hate that about men. Ugh. Seriously, we aren't made of china or anything. I also wanted tp take a moment to thank you for getting Jack's speech right. I hate it when authors make him talk all...Ye be gettin' on me nerves, and such. Did they not watch the movies? Seriously, he is very eloquent, albeit confusing sometimes, but eloquent none-the-less. And so is Hector. I love love reading...(well, when I read, I see the story, so I am actually hearing him speak LOL) his dialogue. It's very pretty. I suppose that Hector was talking up a storm to you in this chapter. Oh, LOL. I loved his distaste for the Honda. LOL. That was funny. And the sissy bar. I bet he was quite indignant when you told him that he was going to be riding on one of those abominations. LOL. Almost as bad, is not worse than those little crotch rocket ninja things. LOL. Well, I can't wait to read more of this wonderful, wonderful, story. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on January 20, 2009
    OH.MY.GOD. You, my dear, dear authoress, are fantastic. This story, is beautiful. The Hector you have written is a wonderful, rougishly handsome man. I adore that he is the member of a motor cycle gang. I can really see his ginger hair braided, his beard as well, all dressed in leather, boots, one of those round helmets, riding along on a big beast of a harley, maybe an older one, and Indian or something. ^.^ I can really see a modern day Hector being a biker. And now whenever I watch any POTC movie after reading your, and Grace Lee's stories, I look for bits of attraction and such between the two. LOL. The way Hector speaks, is simply beautiful. He is still poetic, still speaks in the way he did so long ago, and it is well, *him*. You've really got him down my dear. I am so glad that you posted this wonderful, wonderful story. I know I am jumping around everywhere, I am trying to touch on everything while it is still fresh in my mind, and I am not really coming off as eloquent. LOL. Beth, is wonderful too. Ever strong, ever stubborn, ever independant...And I have to admit, I cheered when Jack came into the picture. When I read about the boat scraping against the hull, I had a gut feeling it was him. And how interesting that she remembered, well, almost remembered him. He is quite unforgetable. LOL. I loved it when he was hopping about on the deck trying to retrieve his phone from his pocket, and Hector's commentary on it. I love all the angst and the torture, I am eager to see what happens with Calypso, what her plans are for Beth and Barbossa, who these people are that Marilyn set on them. And by the way, poor thing. I know what it is like to love somebody, and to not have that love returned. Yes, she was a traiterous wench, but she still loved him for all those years, and all he was focused on was finding his Elizabeth again, and then when he found her, she had to witness him become all...twitter-pated with her. Ah well, may she rest in peace. I hope this review is conveying everything I want to say. For a writer, sometimes I leave pretty ineloquent reviews. LOL. I can't wait to read more. XXOO
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  • From coffeemuse on January 17, 2009
    The suspense is building so much I feel like screaming! Again, another great chapter. :)
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  • From faeriquene on January 13, 2009
    And Jack is back! I love it! I wouldn't have been surprised if Jack and Lizzie *had* met before; she met him first the first time around. But it'll be awfully fun watching him charm her (or try to!) this time, and seeing my two favourite pirates needling each other. I wonder if Jack knows anything about the mysterious villains...
    Can't wait for the next chapter!! :-D
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  • From ElenaPajaro91 on January 13, 2009
    Oooh YAY! JACK IS BACK! I wonder if Jack will want to strike a deal with Caylpso to raise the Pearl from the depths again?
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  • From faeriquene on January 11, 2009
    Aww, Captain and Mate. Glad our Hec's okay, and glad that Jen reacted as expected. Can't wait to see how Elizabeth unravels the mystery here, and how more of her past begins to drip into her present.
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  • From lfuller711 on January 11, 2009
    I am really enjoying your story. You've got me hooked and can hardly wait for the next chapter. I have spent all weekend reading what you have posted so far. Your writing is very enjoyable and I can see the characters in motion from your descriptions. I was a little confused about their physical positions in the "how to ride a motorcycle" scene, but otherwise everything is quite clear. Like Grace's Barbossa in "Parlait" and "Salvage", your Barbossa in my mind's eye is Geoffrey Rush's Barbossa with 15 pounds of added muscle. In other words, Barbossa has been using his bowflex . I also like the fact that you described him as having a foreskin, something some other writers who mention Barbossa's physical attributes don't seem to realize.

    Please write more soon.

    Lynne
    Las Vegas, NV
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  • From coffeemuse on January 10, 2009
    Another great chapter! I am really interested in the fact that Jen is very suspicious of the quick-healing wound, but Elizabeth is just curious. In my mind I am picturing this playing out in so many different ways... Can't wait for more!

    Heather
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  • From ElenaPajaro91 on January 08, 2009
    That old hag deserved to die after shooting our dear Hector. Is his crew gonna take him to Beth anyway, to patch his wound?
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  • From faeriquene on January 07, 2009
    I never mentioned, but I love the way you turn Barbossa's phrases. They're so reminiscent of his old speech, but with a modern twist. Very fitting.

    And he loves her! And he told her, and I love that it wasn't entirely deliberate, just sort of slipped out, but she caught the small distinction - not "luv" but "love."

    Such intrigue with Marilyn! Oh, whoever are these interlopers, and what is in the works?

    The hat feathers tickling Elizabeth! So her former life is beginning to creep into her subconscious memory. And poor Hector, fretting over her possible memories of him as a monster. There's so much to love about this story; I can't wait to see more!
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  • From faeriquene on January 06, 2009
    Hells bells, woman, that was amazing! Happy Birthday indeed! Can't wait to peek inside Hector's mind to see how he feels about finally claiming his prized pirate bride!
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  • From coffeemuse on January 06, 2009
    That was absolutely steamy... Excellent.
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