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Reviews for Make War not Love: Born Sons

By : Jigsaw
  • From ruleroftravels on March 28, 2010
    Awesome story!!!! Really great job, very nicely written and very enjoyable!!

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  • From navajo on October 24, 2009
    Love it hope you write more
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  • From navajo on October 24, 2009
    Love it can't wait for more
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  • From garraffen on October 05, 2008
    ok, that was farking awesome... seriously, continue it as in now, please for the love of all taht is sacred do not leave it hanging!!! ~_~ i thought i'd be disappointed with aff again when i visited it, but his completely wiped of that idea~ CONTINUE.
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  • From ALou on August 29, 2008
    Yeah ! An actually story and not just a PWP...MORE !! Pretty please !
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  • From seductivemessiah on August 16, 2008
    wow i really really like this, it's very well written...i hope you write more!
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  • From ANON - brit on July 12, 2008
    Wah...Why won't you update nemore? ;-; haha..Every time I watch 300 again, I always remember this story. >
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  • From gogotokyo on January 27, 2008
    I read this on Deviantart and I loved it. Please continue!! *angsty, pleading fangirl face*
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  • From Extraho on November 30, 2007
    you said this was to be the first chapter *whines* i want to know what happens with oour favourite boys!!!!
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  • From lornfaer on September 30, 2007
    This fic is so great. I like the way you write. One would think going from one perspective to another WOULD be confusing, but it's not.
    I don't think there's too much dialogue. As long as it's good dialogue (which yours definitely is).
    I love this pairing. My friends called me crazy when I pointed out the obviousness of Stelios and Astinos, but I don't care. It's awesome.
    Update very soon!
    ^_^
    -Lorn

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  • From on August 07, 2007
    i like how you portray the interactions between brother-soliders that was always alluded to in the movie and never explored. i dont remember whether these were greek or persian soliders (possibly alexander the great's?), but in antiquity, it wasnt uncommon for soldiers to pair up as a fighting team and/or as lovers. it was thought to increase the heart and strength of the army in general and was tolerated and approved in a situation much like what you have set up: duty to sparta as (re)productive citizen and professional soldier, heart and soul to battle and their partner. its a duality in masculinity that always fascinated me in the ancient civilization and military histories, and i love seeing it played out thru '300' and your plot and dialogue. yes, dialogue is good!!! it gives the sense of speed or momentum thru the fic. narration gives the reader an impression of a slower, more observant moment. my only recommendation so far for this fic (i love the idea of stelios and astinos together, its a natural extension from the movie and its really freakin hot) is that you use the balance between dialogue and narration carefully in both the combat and romance scenes. given the nature of the characters and the movie (and culture) they originate in, the sudden shift in perspective and reader /plot momentum helps enhance the feeling that yes, this is really what might have been. i really love this first chapter, and i hope my comments were helpful - i really want to see the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - brit on August 06, 2007
    -sighs- I don't care what you think but your story rocks! No complaints and the dialogue? It wasn't complicated at all! I actually enjoyed reading what they'll say and especially what they think. I loved it that you made your story so long and not rushed at all. Like during the water scene, they didn't do it right away, already knowing they loved each other. There's no plot to that! Too quick.

    Ahh yeah..it was really good and I enjoyed reading it a lot. I hope you update soon when you have the time. ^_^ Great job yah! -hugs-
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  • From IamM on August 05, 2007
    Such a wonderful story so far! I can't wait to see where this goes!
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  • From ANON - Eve on August 03, 2007
    I hope it isnt too late! I really like your story!!!! Its building up very well and I really hope you havent stopped writing! I will look for an update!
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  • From ANON - jadedgoth on July 22, 2007
    I love this story so far and can't wait for more. Hurry hurry!

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