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Reviews for Make War not Love: Born Sons

By : Jigsaw
  • From EmptyRaven on July 03, 2007
    You, my friend, have made me both very happy and very sad at the same time. Here you write this great story, get me addicted to Stelios and Astinos, and then never update. :( Please, please, PLEASE update soon. I need my Stelios/Astinos fix.
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  • From Extraho on May 25, 2007
    i loved this so much and i'm waiting for chapter two, there is one coming right. the fast/still feeling you get when fughting is the greatest kick of all. its nlike you can sense everything around you. i train capoeria and unlike other martial arts you have to be mindful not just your opponent, but possible challangers and onlookers as well, because they are so close that if you don't know were they are, an ouchi is in order. the same goes for show jumping really. it goes straight to my head.
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  • From ANON - Yuu on May 24, 2007
    OMG this story is awsome!!! I dont mind if you kept switching POV, cuz you
    made them really natural. Eh? a bed in a hole? That's original!! ^________^
    sorry 4 my ramblings but I just drank lots of cafeine, + your story rwacks!!!
    I hope you'll continue this, and plz update soon!!!seriously dude, keep this up!
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  • From AkitoSouma on May 15, 2007
    Wow, I really love this story! It's so beautiful, and it also manages to be true to the culture. The story skillfully reflects the passion of the characters' deep, conflicted, forbidden love. And all of the notes and links to pictures were really helpful; I thought I recognized the characters by name but the pictures helped to clarify and I was able to visualize everything much better. I did have a hard time following some parts of it. For example, it was often unclear which dialogue belonged to each character. It was so beautiful and passionate and well-developed though that these small difficulties were hardly any bother at all. Please, pretty please update this story soon, it is too wonderful to discontinue!
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  • From ANON - Sancta on May 09, 2007
    I like the way you started it off and can't wait to see how you take things. I believe the most difficult thing will be to keep them in character, but your fighting scenes are well done!
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  • From azalea on May 06, 2007
    First of all- THANK YOU for writing a 300 fic, and secondly- THANK YOU for making it a Stelios and Astinos pairing- In the movie, there was always just a little more between those two and It was a godsend that you chose to develop this. Your story may not be historically accurate, but it is believable, and we’ll penned. I think you have a gift for prose- the plot never seemed too rushed, nor did it seem too lax- when the two finally locked lips, it felt like a monumental moment, which it was, but you rarely get that with fanfiction.
    I caught a few spelling and grammatical errors, but none that stand out too much and are hardly worth noting.
    I look forward to further instalments. ^-^
    -Azalea J.

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  • From Hanna on May 04, 2007
    I loved your fic.I hope you write the next chapters soon, because I am dying to read it. This fic is simply awesome. Very well written and well... the situation the way you wrote the characters.Excellent. :) Please hurry up with the following chapters :)
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  • From ANON - Simon A. Erif on May 04, 2007
    Ok. First of all (not reprimands or flames so rest asured) there was so not 'Too Much' dialogue there. I loved it that they talked. It gave a sort of a 'Life' to the story. Made the characters real to me. And I've been waiting to find some stories of these two ever since I went and saw the movie the first time(seen it twice now and gonna go see it once more if I have the time). For that alone I love you! This seems to be the beginning to a really fantastic story so please keep it up. I hope to read more soon.

    PS: The story has a great flow to it and I love the fact that you had some of the things in (* for people to read/understand in full what you mean by them. Great story! Keep it up! =D
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  • From ANON - Lina on May 04, 2007
    WOW!!!!! THis is such an awesom story!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! Please add more chapters!!!
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  • From darkangel985 on May 03, 2007
    This is absolutely beautiful!
    Your characterization of Stelios and Astinos seems perfect to me and your writing style is very pretty. Plus the story seemed very realistic to me and fit the historical background.
    I hope you continue this soon.
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