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Reviews for What You Never Know (Won't Hurt You?)

By : MuseofScrolls
  • From ANON - Scarlett on November 05, 2006
    I am realy liking this story and cant wait for another chapter. It is realy good so far. I like how you think things out and explain them so clearly. When Tor'ac is talking. Such as his oppinon on the fruit. Tis so cool. I second the oppinon of having it be like harry and the hendersons. Twould be soo cute. Hes trying to figure stuff out and such. Oh and another funny thought is to have Mya snore and Tor'ac hears it. He goes to find out what it is. I have a few ideas. If you would like to contact me my AIM is wolfthesnake@aol.com. Hope to hear from you. I realy do enjoy your story and how it is not so much smut filled in the first chapters. That is a awsome thing in my oppinon. I can see it like twoards the middel and ends of storys or atleast hell after the first chap. It just always seems soooo unrealistic when they are like screwing in the first damn paragraph.
    well yours truly.
    a fan
    scarlett.
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  • From ANON - c on November 05, 2006
    this is fun! let him have a couple days to recover and explore before the others show up if you want. sounds like an interestin' story
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  • From ANON - Mark on November 05, 2006
    Interesting, and funny with the pet cat. :)

    Given this is an adultsite, here's an idea. Imagine if Mya walked in on To'rac enjoying himself? Something he smelled triggered that part of him and well given he isn't human he won't care if they see him.
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  • From ANON - Cara on November 05, 2006
    Oh really interesting Torac's POV. I wasn't expecting that.
    Will we get to find out what Torac's mission was on Earth?
    Keep writing this, you've really got a great plot going.
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  • From ANON - kami_no_yami on November 05, 2006
    I realy like your story and i'm very interested to see how things will develope. Thank you for updating so quickly. I loved reading things from Tor'ak(sp?)s POV it was very interesting. I hope you update soon and continue w/the great work.

    Ja ne! ^.~
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on November 05, 2006
    Very good update. I'd love to hear more from Tor'ac's POV. Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - Nalani on November 04, 2006
    Aww! That was adorable! I love this fic so much and I can't wait for more! So be quick! I have to know whats going on with him and the clan ship! What is he there to do? What is he going to do with the other girl watching him? OR THE CAT? Please be fast... I need to know what happenes.
    E.M.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on November 04, 2006
    Keep up the good work. I will be waiting for more! :)
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  • From ANON - Scarlett on November 02, 2006
    I love the story so far its wonderful. I personaly think that he should spend a bit more time with her. Its a good storry i would let it flow longer than just a few chaps. It would be very interesting to read.
    If you wish to speak i am on aim as wolfthesnake@aol.com.
    Hope to read more of this soon.
    Yours truly
    scarlett
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  • From ANON - scars lady 13 on November 02, 2006
    he should spend more time with Mya, defintly !!!
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  • From ANON - scars lady 13 on November 02, 2006
    he should spend more time with Mya, defintly !!!
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  • From ANON - Kristi on November 02, 2006
    Love it so far. It's well written. I really hope you continue it soon. Oh, and I would like to see his fellow predators jion in on the fun soon. But in the end that's all up to you and how the story goes.
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  • From ANON - Mark on November 02, 2006
    Hmm, Mya and Tor'ac together sounds nice. It'd be nice showing them alone getting to know each other as friends and more so as they form a close relationship. I'd liken the situation to the movie Harry and the Hendersons. :) It'd be funny if the poor Yajuta had a few problems living in a human's home. Such as getting hyper on coffee or by accident walking in on Mya in the shower.
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  • From ANON - kami_no_yami on November 02, 2006
    this story is great so far. i think he should spend a little more time w/mya before his friends should show up.

    ja ne! ^.~
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  • From BlackberryPatch on November 01, 2006
    Hehehehehehehehe!!! But you've already heard all that...
    Me like very much. ;b It's hilarious, though I suppose it helps some that I can almost see some of the places you talk about. Oh, and I give Leah my stamp of approval. Continue!!
    =]
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