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Reviews for What You Never Know (Won't Hurt You?)

By : MuseofScrolls
  • From ANON - Lina on November 01, 2006
    WOW!!! What an amazing story!!!! And, I'm so glad you are not like other authors who have their characters screwing each other in the first chapter, b/c.... THAT IS SO UNREALISTIC!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kehlan on November 01, 2006
    This is great - well written and exciting, a pleasure to read. I'd like to see you keep up some action and a bit of suspense, keep us guessing a bit. If it were up to me I would have those men follow Mya home somehow and cause seom trouble... Whatever you decide, please don't keep us waiting too long, I really want to read more of this.
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  • From ANON - Astaral Reaper on October 31, 2006
    I loved the plotline so far i think he should defintely stay in the apartment it would be much more interesting then,cant wait to read some nice lemon in the next few chapters
    keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on October 31, 2006
    HHMMM! I liked it. It has potential. Could go lots of ways. I am interested in seeing where u will take it. I like surprises! :)
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  • From ANON - Firefly on October 31, 2006
    wow this is really good I can tell things will get better I will be awaiting more
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 31, 2006
    Yes! A new story!
    I really enjoyed this. It was well written and the details on Tor'ac were great.
    you should continue the story definetly =)
    He should stay longer with Mya...
    and see what happens from there.
    And is this going to be a relationship between Tor'ac and Mya?
    Well, keep writing and Happy Hallowe'en.
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - Shyann on October 31, 2006
    This is great..He should spend some QT time with his soon to be Mate..(hint,hint) ;)
    Keep it coming......
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on October 31, 2006
    Very good. I like the eat more fibre line. I could imagine it sounding that way.

    I think Tor'ac should spend some more time with Mya before his fellow Yautja arrive. Maybe have the four men return or get close to finding him.

    It's up to you but please keep going.
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  • From ANON - Kraven Spider on October 31, 2006
    I like it I think he should spend sometime with Mya you know screw stuff up. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Primal on October 31, 2006
    this is really cool i hope you update soon. i think he should spend more time with Mya get to know her more but thats up to you.
    please dont keep you reads waiting to long
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