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Reviews for What You Never Know (Won't Hurt You?)

By : MuseofScrolls
  • From ANON - Zee on January 07, 2007
    Wow! This story is awesome and you are doing a great job of developing your characters. Too many stories jump right in, but this is very good and interesting because it has depth. I hope that you will update very soon!
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  • From ANON - Cara on January 07, 2007
    I love your story. I love how things don't move too fast or too slow...and how you can create such believable fiction. I love your characters and the realistic dialogue between Tor and Mya. You're very talented. I wish you wrote more stories.. well you should, sometime. :)
    I think you should have a male introduced into the story, a friend of Mya's or something like that but not a very important character...so we can how Tor'ac would react to a male and if he would get jealous?
    Just a suggestion. Man I can't wait to see what Tor has up his sleeve...er...armour sleeve.
    You're doing absolutely fantastic!
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - kami_no_yami on January 07, 2007
    Thank you for updating your story for all us eagerly awaiting readers. I was a little worried about you and thought you might not be coming back! I look forward to your next update. I will say it now if I haven't already:
    1) I love how you switch their POV's in this story w/o to much overlaping and how it foreshadows instead of revealing most of your plot. You do know how to keep us baited! ^__^

    2)Please continue your story I would like to tell you that though I read many I only review to those that I believe have potential and passion. You are a great writer and I hope YOUR Hunter's light burns bright and long in this skill.

    ~Ja ne! ^.~
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  • From ANON - Scarlett on December 13, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!
    Wolfthenskae@aol.com
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  • From ANON - Scarlett on December 13, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!
    Wolfthenskae@aol.com
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  • From ANON - Cathy2u on December 03, 2006
    LOVE IT!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nahau on November 18, 2006
    This chapter was great. You did some awesome improvement in To'rac's POV (sorry if i spelled his name wrong). I can't wait for the next chapter and to see what will happen between him and Mya. Thanks for sharing your imagination.
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  • From ANON - aquamum on November 16, 2006
    I love the first three chapters, especially no. #3.

    I'm glad she passed his test, she has shown him that she trusts him - very important !!!!!

    Looking forward to future updates......
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  • From ANON - Cara on November 16, 2006
    Well I thought this was serious before...but I think I know what you mean.
    Interesting that Tor'ac would test her. And how brave of Mya! I'm glad he's impressed with her. I would loveee to see a yautja with a kitty haha. Awwh. :)
    As long as you continue to write more amazing chapters I have no problem waiting for the next update. *is lying a little bit* OK ok. It's such a good story though!
    Things move at a nice pace. I like it. But you prolly already figured that out heh.
    Take care and good writing
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on November 16, 2006
    Very good chapter. I could just imagine To'rac sitting there, the cat curled up in his lap. The perfect chair. I'll have a Yautja recliner please salesperson.

    I thought the test was excellent. It'll be interesting to see what happened in Mya's past. You must keep goin, but make sure it's at your pace.
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  • From ANON - kiki on November 14, 2006
    what's wrong with u? u can't just fucking leave it there! are u doing this on purpose!? anyway, fucking cool story. plz continue! TT_TT
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  • From ANON - Nahau on November 10, 2006
    Your story is awesome, I can't to see what happens next. One thing though, Tor'ac seems a little too human, especaially when you did his pov. But you are the writer and I'm not so do what what you want. I love your fic, keep it up.
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  • From BlackberryPatch on November 08, 2006
    Oh, I love that he thinks her lips are weird! ;b A most entertaining chapter.
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  • From ANON - The Yautja Bard on November 07, 2006
    Continue...

    This...intrigues me...

    very...very...much...

    Ooman...

    (>_
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  • From ANON - kristi on November 06, 2006
    still going great. I'm glad you put his piont of view in that always makes the story more intresting. At least to me anyways
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