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Reviews for Scar, Friend or Foe p.II

By : BlueBastard
  • From DeathGodDist on August 08, 2009
    Very very nice chapter! What I really enjoy about your writing is how well you portray the Yautja as immense physical powerhouses and the sheer force and extreme power they exhude, especially when dealing out damage. :)

    Poor Lex, she's really getting beaten up now, even after she went through all that to earn her place, guess things won't be so accomodating at the start, though at least it seemed as though her actions were starting to win others over. Lex's inner dialog is really funny, especially when she's trying so hard not to imagine doing anything "innapropriate" with Scar, or just imagining about him in general, seems she just can't keep her eyes off of him. :D

    BTW, Scar is really awesome, again, you write him in such a way that he just is quite the badass and so powerful. The way he took out that annoying guy was just awesome, you do a great job putting him in action. I hope he will be able to tolerate Lex whenever she may get into her moods. Hopefully they can figure each other out without too much "discomfort" :)

    Again, great chapter, so glad you are really continuing with this. Can't wait for more!

    -DGD
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  • From ANON - aquamum on August 05, 2009
    Absolutely....its wonderful, its great. and the HMS will happen soon between them I hope.
    Great story
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  • From DeathGodDist on August 01, 2009
    I must start by offering my most sincere apologies. This story has been on here for a while, yet I did not bother to read it. Boy, did I not realize what I was missing. This story is awesome. It also helps having just recently watched the movie again too. :)

    I love the way you crafted the alternate timeline from the original source, it definitely seems believable to me anyways. You have a great attention to detail which you showed off spectacularly with the fight scene, such things are very difficult to write because you have to try to get the reader into the moment and get them to imagine what is going on just by reading. But you pulled it off flawlessly.

    So yes, pretty please (with sugar on top!), do continue this story. I just loved the final scene that seems to be hinting at some nice hot tension brewing between them. Oh, and though the story will center around the Scar/Lex pairing, I would just love to see a Rave/Lex pairing to spice things up even more. (cause those two have real chemistry too IMO) :)

    Again, bravo, and sorry I didn't find this sooner!

    -DGD
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  • From ANON - Storm on July 31, 2009
    Should you continue? SHOULD YOU CONTINUE! *screams* YES! *points at Liltinybee review* What she said! Also why do all the good writers in the this area update alot and then suddenly drop of the grid?!!?!?! Its annoying but understandable at the same time! Life gets in the way or writers block; so much can keep someone away from writing but I beg you don't leave this story undone!! It is one of few good ones out there and did I say that I am in awe at your fighting scenes! Gods above and below! I dream of being able to write fight scenes like that! I'm begging you please! Update and don't leave this story undone!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Liltinybee on July 27, 2009
    Oh, please say you'll continue the story!! I have been waiting years to read more!! This was the first story in the fandom that I read and it's been my fave even till now. You have a great talent for writing action. Plus, you're just starting to explore Lex and Scar's relationship now. Please please write more!!
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  • From torturequeen06 on July 26, 2009
    So, I'm totally in love with this story. I think you should continue it. I read all of it pretty much in a day. I hope you do continue it, it's amazing. :)
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  • From ANON - Argos on July 26, 2009
    CONTINUE PLEASE
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  • From kelliechar on July 24, 2009
    yes please continue omg this is a good story LOVED the fight scene, cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From Vyper on July 23, 2009
    Great story. I like the naked Scar scene. That was classic.
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  • From ANON - Syn on July 06, 2009
    It made me sad to see that this story had been last updated three years ago. This story is enticing and I haven't read one this well written in a long while. You play out the fight scenes well and brilliantly describe them. You don't just jump into Lex and Scar developing feelings....you actually let them develop instead of declaring love the first chapter.
    I wish greatly that you would continue this story, it is beautiful written and I look for hopefully more to come.
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  • From ANON - Bugsbunny on October 23, 2008
    I loved the whole story but was wondering if there was going to be a continuation or if this wsa it.Big HUG on a job well done.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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  • From Lavonne on April 27, 2008
    ... no it cant stop there... plz call upon your muse... plead... congole... hell threaten the muse if need be :p i shall wait patiently for the next chapter ^_^
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  • From Selece on July 06, 2007
    I hope you are able to update soon. =O I saw this story on fanfiction.net and migrated over here. =O I was like, omg no way! But yes way! =3

    I'll be keeping an eye on your story till then. *stalks for updates*. xD
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  • From sixhornscentaur on June 11, 2007
    OH MY GOD AND GODESS.FREAKING AWSOME. so FREAKING AWSOME IT'S LIKE DEATHWATCH THE TERMINATOR AND SPAWN HAD UNHOLY CHILDREN AND IT WALKED UP TO YOUR HOUSE AT 3 AM ASKING IF YOU WANT TO GO HANG OUT AND PLAY DDR WITH FROST DRAGONS, PIRATES, AND NINJAS AND WE ALL PLAY ON THE HARDEST SETTING WHILE EATING SMARTIES AND BALACEING MANGOS ON OUR HEADS AND YOU GET AN A+ AND A REALITY TV SHOW TO DISPLAY YOUR XENOMORPH TROPHY. O.O I'M WATCHING YOOOOOUU.
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  • From pyrodaemon on March 22, 2007
    I really, really like this story. You should finish it before I go out of my mind wondering what happens next.
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