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Reviews for Scar, Friend or Foe p.II

By : BlueBastard
  • From ANON - Priscilla on April 27, 2010
    noooo, I hate cliffys they make by b/p go up! damnit get back here
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  • From EvaBrick on April 27, 2010
    Ahhhh! A cliffhanger! I'm busting to find out what happens next! Awesome story, can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - yamimagami on April 23, 2010
    i love this story. you my friend are a great writer. ok now that im done sucking up please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Toni on April 18, 2010
    Loves it!!!!!!!!!

    Please update soon, or i will be forced to tear out my own spine with anxiety!!!!!!!!

    Im glad Scar has a bit of comp' for the sexy Lex!!!!

    Bwaahahaaha good work!
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  • From ANON - Bee on April 13, 2010
    I love you more now that I got an update and a special shout out! lol. Oh no Scar don't give me the deathlook, Blue is the one that is making Lexi all sexy in her bikini outfit and therefore leaving you with more males to pummel.

    This was one of my favorite chapters. Thank you so much for updating and I love that your title of the chapter was damn outfit! haha. Wow so Dalantu is serious about Lex. Court her until she warms his bed?!? I have to say I was impressed that Scar didn't sock him in the face for uttering those lines alone. Poor guy I think he is jealous but is still processing in his head what Lex means to him. Wow that is such a typical male thing to do. He loves her but is not yet ready to admit that to himself! I am dying to know what is Dalantu going to do to win Lex over (not that he can, I mean she is firmly Scar's girl, right?!? Oh for the love of god please let her be Scar's girl!)

    Most ominous line of the chapter - "Dalantu gave a small chuckle, as he straightened up to his full height, before replying, “We shall see.” Oh my god, thank god Lex is a strong kick ass woman because I would be kinda scared of some big honored warrior was like you will be mine. muawahahaha.
    Funniest Line - "She leveled him with a glare, before stalking off, growling, “I swear, if one more Yautja tries to grope me, I am going to rip his gonads off.”
    Sexiest Lines - "The way she kept evading him, and the alluring heat of her taunts, triggered the primitive hunger within Scar. He purred dangerously as he advanced." Very sexy. I like seeing Scar being all dangerous and sexy while stalking Lexi. I think as the days progress, he is going to have a harder time resisting her...I CAN'T WAIT! lol.
    I also can't wait to see how Lex is going to react when she finds out what "do you speak for her" means....maybe she should just ask Rav...oh la la love this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! Please please update soon. I will be oh so happy if you update!

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  • From RSLaehnart89 on April 12, 2010
    I am just loving this story! It's amazingly well written, serious yet quirky and comedic, and it grips you and doesn't let go.
    I will be giddily awaiting the next chapter. ^ ^
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  • From ANON - JenovaPooh on March 13, 2010
    I'm really glad to see that you've posted a new chapter!!

    Please make haste with the next one! :D

    I really like this chapter; exploring relationships is almost always interesting to read.
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  • From Lenora on March 09, 2010
    Holy crap. I never thought I could find a Predator fic that I could fall immediately in love with, but after the first chapter of Scar, Friend or Foe, I was hooked. I can't wait for the next chapter of this. If you could, could you email me to let me know when you update next?

    -Lenora
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  • From ANON - Bee on March 04, 2010
    I love you! Thank you for posting. Please do it again...frequently! lol.
    Hmm so I guess do you speak for her means if she belongs to Scar? I love a jealous Scar, this honored warrior is probably going to be persistent if he thinks Lex is unattached.


    "Lex didn’t know how to take the different reactions she was getting. Seeing as how everyone was either indifferent or eager to kill her before, she could only blame what was happening now on her new outfit." hahaha now that the yajuta know she has skill, her sexiness in the outfit is getting some male attention. I love it!

    "Basically, while the amount of challenges reduced drastically, the new advances were increasing. Unfortunately, while it was less physically challenging, it was no less exhausting." I really can't wait to see how Scar is going to deal with this. I thought it was so romantic when he remembered that he told her he wouldn't ever leave her. I can't wait to see them admit their feelings or at least have a jealous Scar start beating up the rivals. hahaha.

    LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
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  • From on February 24, 2010
    ooooh your going to continue yes??? you had better lol
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  • From Adegan2112 on February 13, 2010
    I'm glad to see this story is back! Write more soon, I'm enjoying Lex's further adventures!
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  • From ANON - NoName69 on January 21, 2010
    i hope that you didnt discontinued this story. its very good and i really want to know what happens next! i read part one in one sitting and i loved it, i couldnt wait to start part too and now that i finished what you have so far i want to read more T_T please continue it!!
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  • From ANON - destiny mcneil on January 10, 2010
    will there be more written if so plz email me. i hope there is it seems so sad if it ends here.
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  • From ANON - Bee on September 28, 2009
    oh my gosh I love this story. Lex is fantastically feminine but strong and Scar is so masculine and yummy. lol. I love seeing how their relationship is progressing. Is Ragtok going come back into the story and actually like Lex because I am guessing once the Yaujta men starting seeing that Lex is not only a strong (as see defeated the toughest warrior) but beautiful, she will probably become a desirable mate especially as she becomes more and more accepted into the clan. Oh I am excited, it will be interesting to see a jealous Scar! hahaha. Your writing is splendid!
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  • From bloodravyn on August 15, 2009
    this is just as good as the first one!
    i love all the action it as well!
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