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Reviews for The Map

By : Boshomengro
  • From dominica on October 08, 2007
    You have done a beautiful job. Congratulations! I will look for other writings you do. You are quite talented. If I were you I would try to invent a story and your own characters and run with it. I am sure you could. How do you say it 'over there' - - t'was 'brilliant!'
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  • From dominica on October 01, 2007
    Just some encouragement to continue the story. It is quite enchanting.
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  • From dominica on September 12, 2007
    Very good story. I like that the characters are well developed. I hope you will be able to finish it soon. I enjoy it immensely. Even if Jack was quite careless and selfish about Nell it seems he has risen to the challenge of being loved and loving. A real fun read. Continue.......Thanks, I give you top rating.
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  • From ANON - anna on August 11, 2007
    simply amazing! this is a great continuation of the story of nell. so very glad that will, elizabeth, norrington and everyone else is taking such a critical role in this installment of the adventures of nell and jack continue on. i love the plot twisting and turning. the tsunami is a great touch, and a dash of hope that spencer, gillete and davenport will fail in people able to reapprehend our star characters. i hope they get away safe. i hope a ship the size of the pearl can withstand the force of the tsunami. cannnot wait for your next installment. cliff hanger!! again great job so far. bravo!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on July 27, 2007
    I was so excited to see that you had updated this story. I've been waiting, which seems like forever for another creative chapter, so to my surprise when I logged onto the site, you added two chapters. YAY!!! This is hands down the best Captain Jack story I have read and believe me I have read a lot of them. I never want this story to end. So thank you for the update and the many chapters of pure entertainment. Looking forward to reading more............
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  • From ANON - BabyBoy1 on October 06, 2006
    This is the second time I've read "The Map" through, and I was delighted to see new chapters! (When I first read it, I think it ended with Jack killing DeMornay and Beaumont.) Anyway, I'm glad you had Jack and Nell marry! And the words that Jack has been saying to Nell in the past few chapters! My! Takes one's breath away, doesn't it? Sure wish just once in my life I'd have a fellow saying such loving sentiments to me and meaning them! Sigh... I was rereading it over at fanfiction but just had to finish reading it on this site once the two became intimate. I mean, 34 chapters or some such into it before they actually get down to business... had to reward myself by reading the unexpurgurated version! I will keep an eye out for further chapters. I don't recall if you ever explained why it is Nell thinks she can't have children. I'm hoping that is just a tale told to her by the horrible B & DeM when she fell off her horse as a child, and that she and Jack will conceive and raise a family. Only one small complaint: you had Brown and Knowles lose their heads in the caves and then had them alive again, and then had them dead again, fighting with the monks and villagers against Jack et al on the beach. That was a little jarring. Otherwise, thanks for a great tale - right up there with the best works of AniSparrow and Hils!
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  • From ANON - anna on September 18, 2006
    I do protest to the marry at sea not being legal!

    While I was in Key West this summer (enjoying the current "pirate fever" they've got going on down there) I decided to go on one of the sunset cruises on a schooner called "Western Union" (yes Western Union really used the ship, way back in the early 1900's to lay copper wire down so wire transmissions could be sent between the US and the islands.. but anyway) During the sunset cruise the Captain married a couple, they signed the marriage license, and the bride tossed the flowers.

    Want proof? Check out this picture

    http://pics.livejournal.com/slayer22187/pic/00008yhb/s640x480
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  • From ANON - Charli on September 16, 2006
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW They got married!! Jack and Nell together at least. It was beautifully written but the one I feel sorry for now is Bryant because like Norrie in the first film he lost out, so maybe that can be sorted? I loved it, more soon please!
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  • From ANON - ani sparrow on September 10, 2006
    YAY! Married! That was lovely *le sigh*

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  • From ANON - ani sparrow on September 10, 2006
    Phew! What was there NOT to enjoy?! Spare a thought for me, having to TRY and edit that...


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  • From ANON - Ash on August 12, 2006
    I really love this story! I can't wait to see what happens to Jack and Nell next. I hope you're able to update soon. I really want to see if Nell ever meets her brother.
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  • From ANON - BabyBoy1 on August 09, 2006
    Yes, please, aanother chapter! I NEED to know how they get back to Port Royal; how Jack & Nell make out; will Will ever blacksmith or swordfight again? Does Elizabeth bring this child into the world without incident? Can Bryant take permanent command of the Relentless? Wat about Hock and Tilly? Yes, I want to see your side story too! Please, another chapter. Quick! Oh, the suspense is killing me!
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  • From ANON - 1BabyBoy on August 09, 2006
    This is such a wonderful story that I keep reading and reading, hoping it will never end, even as I get impatient with Nell about just not totally surrendering her entire self to Jack. Seems she has some sense of self left to keep finding the inner strength not to completely fall apart after everything she's been through. And Jack has been so marvelously selfless with her! (Where can I find a hero like that in real life?) I like how you have developed all the secondary characters. Hock is so sexy. And I laughed at Lady Clarence being Tilly. I'd have thought from the outset that her given name would have been Penelope or Beatrice or something equally prim, proper and holier-than-thou. Back to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Suriya on August 08, 2006
    ¤¤¤I have no words describing how amazing job you have done with writing The Map.¤¤¤
    THIS IS ABSOLUTELY THE BEST FIC I'VE EVER READ! And I have to agree with some previous rewiew that this story should have been filmed.
    Don't get me wrong, I loved Dead man's chest too, but still...
    I can think far better ideas what to do with Jack than barbecue him!
    Not to mention the "honour factor" that was one of the things that made first film
    so great! You have managed to savour that too, without compromising Jack.
    For instance, I was so sad how they portrayed Norry (allthough he looked hot)
    Forever grateful for your work!-Your humble fan-
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  • From ANON - Charli on August 03, 2006
    Wow! How do you write like that! Those exchanges between Jack and Nell were so touching but yay it's not the end and yay the evil 2 are dead even though I did feel sorry for them by the end. This story is brilliant, no denying that and I'll be sad to see it finish. Question- will there be a sequel in the future??? I sure hope so!
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