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By : Boshomengro
  • From ANON - night on August 03, 2006
    hullo from la gomera,
    yes in fact i do believe u should post the side story! hock is my fav. character. besides nell n jack o´course.
    also i think u should start to consider a sequel! nell n jack ... off to save the world from super natural things ... dun dunn...
    lol
    i loved this chapter. more nell jack fluff, please!
    byes!
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  • From ANON - danzapalooza on August 02, 2006
    Finally they're gone!! I love this story...update soon!
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  • From ANON - jessica on August 02, 2006
    Yet another great chapter, luv!

    Thank God they're finally DEAD! I don't think my heart could take another Nell-napping by the likes of those two!
    And the monks are gone! Phew. I hope that Jack and Nell will be able to get some much needed rest & relaxation w/
    one another now. *wink wink* *nudge nudge*
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  • From ANON - M M on August 02, 2006
    Of course we are interested (silly question). Lovely chapter as always. What will they do to occupy themselves now?
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  • From ANON - anna on July 24, 2006
    -puts down the popcorn-

    darn those cliffhangers. something the whole world of pirates has come accustomed to doing. (if you've seen POTC 2 you know what i'm talking about)

    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Charli on July 23, 2006
    A great chapter. I love the Governor! He's just so cute and caring and Jack is going to do everything he can to get Nell back. Whenever I read this story it just keeps throwing me back because I think you've done all the twists and turns but then suddenly you hit us with more! It's amazing your imagination and I'm very impressed! I'm also anticipating a few more twists before the end and can I just say wooooo to Captain Bryant!!! :D I like him and Norrie, they're so cute!
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  • From ANON - DanzaPalooza on July 23, 2006
    Gaaahh! Horrid, horrid cliffhanger!!!! Update really really soon please!!!!
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  • From ANON - DanzaPalooza on July 17, 2006
    Oh. My. Goodness. Update ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on July 16, 2006
    This is the best POTC story I have read bar-none. Please don't wait too long to update! I hope that after you are finished with this story (which makes me sad to think it will be over soon), I hope that you go on to write other stories in the POTC fandom as well on this site. You really are very gifted!
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  • From ANON - mrs capt jack sparrows on July 12, 2006
    I luv your story! Keep Writin' Mate! I can't wait fer the updates. I love that you throw in twists an' turns that I don't really expect, like here I thought we were done with those blasted monks and I thought that Beaumont and De Mornay were safely tucked away in the Pearl's brig where they couldn't hurt Nell...an' then you go an' proved me wrong an' brought back the monks an' then Beaumont an' De Mornay escaped an' kidnaped Nell again...for a 3rd bloody time, not to mention the Gov'ner. That girl needs to learn how to fight better... 'specially if she's gonna be livin' on the Pearl with Jack. She can't keep gettin' hit over the head. Sooner or later she'll have so much brain damage from bein' hit on the head she'll be walkin, talkin' and actin' like Jack! lol. Poor Gov'ner gettin' shot in th' arm. I bet he's never experianced that kind o' pain 'afore. All I can say is....UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE???

    As Always...Take What Ye Can...Give Nothin' Back!
    Mrs Capt Jack Sparrows
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  • From ANON - pokey on July 10, 2006
    erm...where to start? Well, first of all, I love this story! I sort of gave up on the potc fandom after a while because most of the stories just weren't worth the effort to read. However, I just saw Dead Man's Chest, and it renewed my interest in the fandom. So, my hope is restored, by you.
    Anyway, enough of my rambling. I thought the idea of the monks was really good, and really creepy. Yeesh... the hand in the cave bit almost gave me a panic attack. And the priest in Aruba, too, that was well done. I just have to remind myself not to read at night, otherwise I can't fall asleep afterward!
    Uh... constructive criticism... not much to say, I think everyone is almost always in character, especially Jack. Just a few spelling errors. And one more thing- is it too much to hope that Norrington and Bryant might get together? I think they'd be cute, sort of like a forbidden love in regimentals type of thing.
    Thank you for taking the time to write and post. I think if you still want to be a professional writer, you have the talent, so go for it!
    Good luck, and have a great day, wherever you are.
    -Pokey
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  • From ANON - tina on July 09, 2006
    more more i need somthing to read.
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  • From ANON - Charli on July 08, 2006
    Oh dear, things really aren't going Jack's way at all and why does it always have to be the Governor?! Not that I'm cpmplaining, another very good chapter and another one soon please. I just hope the ending is happy....
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  • From ANON - kaitlyn on July 07, 2006
    oh this is exciting!! I'm all fired up b/c i just saw PotC 2 at midnight last night, and it was so good!!! EEEE!!! Although, this story would have made a good plot for the movie too, and i was slightly disconcerted when there was nothing about monks or an island in the second movie:)
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  • From ANON - night on July 05, 2006
    haha! wow an exciting chapter.
    it felt like it was way too short! however, yes, many my questions were answered. thanks! :D
    i liked the idea with the longboats and the rope being the 'bridge' for the monks from the island to the pearl. *eyes any objects in my room that might be supernatural*
    and wow! suddenly gilette and the governor are in this too! that actually made me smile. (although the situation is super serious)
    well i BEG YOU to update soon again! because i simply can't wait to see what happens with poor nell on board of the heron.
    and when will jack finally just *kill* these two bitches for keep stirring up trouble?
    oh! and somehow i have a feeling that it isn't enough to just destroy all the remains of the island that would be abord the pearl... hm...

    AW WELL i loved this chapter, very hectic! :D
    please please please update soon!
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