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Reviews for Be All, End All

By : Chriscent
  • From Demondogs on January 02, 2006
    Very Nice! I enjoyed reading ALL of this in one sitting! Its like 1:49 a.m and I am Whipped! So I'm not gonna write much here! LOL! *Yawns* Oh man! This is one of the best ficts I have read! The entire story kept me gessing about what was going to happen next! You have a great plot line going and you are keeping the characters in.....um....character! LOL! Please update soon I am dying to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - lily on December 29, 2005
    I figured after enjoying 23 chapters of your story the least i could do is review and tell you how much i like it...if your taking requests make it a dom darynn thing in the end, pretty please with a cherry on top!
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  • From ANON - lollypop on December 28, 2005
    i nearly exploded when i saw chapter twenty three up. Low and Vince turning up at Daryns truck like that was well weird - do we get an explanation for that?? More soon please
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  • From ANON - bebe on December 28, 2005
    this story is getting good...im not a very big fan of guy on guy....matter of fact, it does nothing for me, but you made it sound really good...good work...liked it....not loved it, but consider urself a good writer if i liked it...cuz i ussually dont. liked this chapter too...no i loved it....
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  • From ANON - betty on December 23, 2005
    You know, I'm really interested as to how you will finish this whole story. Not that I want it to end, but I am curious. Now we know that Dom likes guys too - or does he? The way you described his actions left me thinking that he likes guys bt isn't keen on fucking them. But anyway, now we know he is inclined to guys, this leads me to believe that perhaps he and Vince or Leon or one of the others may have been involved in a little action as well. I'm looking forward to as many updates as you give us. Please continue! :)
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  • From ANON - lolly pop on December 10, 2005
    as the little boy from the incredibles says:

    "that was totally wicked!"

    maybe because it's 8.47 am on a saturday morning, but damn, that's gotten my weekend going.
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  • From ANON - volume on November 29, 2005
    great way to end the chapter

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  • From ANON - Cina on November 28, 2005
    You're doing a great job; please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - LAUREN on November 23, 2005
    HAHAHAHA
    I LOVE YOUR DOM

    DARYNN DOESN'T FALL TO HIS EVERY WHIM, AND HE'S NOT PORTRAYED AS 'PERFECT' LIKE HE IS IN SO MANY FICS. I LIKE THAT YOU'RE NOT MOVING THE MOVING THE STORY TOO QUICKLY, BUT NOT PAIN STAKINGLY SLOW EITHER. THE TENSION IS ALREADY AT BREAKING POINT WITH ROME/DOM, DARYNN/DOM/DARYNN/DOM/ROME AND THAT SLAMMED DOOR IN THE FACE?! OUJA! NOT GOING TO LIKE THAT ONE IS HE????? REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTERS, AND THANKS FOR POSTING WHAT YOU HAVE ALREADY.
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  • From ANON - SilverCircle on November 23, 2005
    Loved the updates! Keep 'em coming :)
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  • From ANON - bebe on November 23, 2005
    lol poor dom
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  • From mm4ever on November 20, 2005
    This is a great story....i cant wait to read more so please update again soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bebe on November 19, 2005
    Quote- yeah. I remember that little bitch. It was hot.”- hahahahaha BRILLIANT!

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  • From ANON - lauren on November 18, 2005
    WOW!!! good one. you're an excellent writer. please continue
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  • From ANON - SilverCircle on November 17, 2005
    I really like the story so far. Keep up the good work. Please update soon :)
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