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Reviews for Be All, End All

By : Chriscent
  • From ANON - bebe on November 17, 2005
    god the tension of this story is killin me! man, y oh y wont they hook up! LoL

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2005
    This is great can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - lauren on November 06, 2005
    damn...you've got 1500++ hits, and yet only ten reveiews? what's wrong with these people who are reading? by far the best FATF fiction on here (IMO anyway). Janna/Darynn was a bit of surprise, but it was good. It didn't jerk the story which sometimes happens. I didn't know you had updated, I'll be checking back a bit more often, see what's kicking. Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - volume on October 18, 2005
    woohoo I was loosing hope that you'd leave the story for a moment
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  • From ANON - volume on October 09, 2005
    I can't wait till you update. Will dom find out she's an O'Connor?Will he care?
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  • From ANON - *mysterio* on September 28, 2005
    Please more! I'm down on my knees begging! The resistance this girl has is admireable! I'd probably already have jumped him!
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  • From ANON - munchkin on September 20, 2005
    Hey Chris,

    Wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. The give and take between Darynn and the guys is great. I'm also lovin' the part about the "lovers". Hmmm? Something to think about.

    I've read some of your stuff on other sights too and I have to say, you have to be one of my favorites.

    I can't wait to read the next chapter on this one. I'll keep tabs.

    Munchkin
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  • From ANON - Phreak on September 17, 2005
    I really dig your story, Darynn is a very original and strong character and I love how she interacts with the team, especially Vince. My curiosity is piqued in regards to the whole Vince Dom thing and of course I can't wait to see what kind of trouble Darynn gets into with Dom next. Keep up the great work!

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2005
    Amazing stuff. I love the way you write. This seems a very unique piece of fiction, the relationship that dom and vince have is very intriguing. please continue and update this soon. looking forward to reading more of this.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on August 08, 2005
    Cool story!! I really hope you continue on soon. I am lovin it.
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  • From ANON - Tobias on August 05, 2005
    I eagerly read all 5 chapters and look forward to more. Interesting to see little glimpses and hints of what happened in the movie. Your characterizations are great! Love V's passive/aggressiveness and Dom's broodiness.

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Eryn on July 28, 2005
    Two chapters in three days- nice. Looking forward to more, this is shaping up to be a great story.
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  • From ANON - me on July 26, 2005
    i like this alot it seems very promising. please continue, i look forward to the other chapters
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