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Reviews for Going Back to Yesterday

By : Alethia
  • From Cyranothe2nd on May 10, 2005
    Very nice. Please continue.

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  • From pensfan100 on May 03, 2005
    A very intriguing beginning. I could not stop reading it and I am looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Caz on May 02, 2005
    Wow, look forward to the next installment. Very well done.
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  • From ANON - pink_martini2 on May 01, 2005
    Well, u kinda confused me w/ ur author's note. This isn't ff.net, sweetie. Its OKAY to post nc-17 fics, thats the whole purpose. Unless u wrote a graphic morbid detailed killing. Cuse everything else just won't surprise me, i've read some pretty nasty stuff out there.

    The fic is good sa far, and will be looking forward to more updates. Hopefully u can get the unedited version out too. if not, would u be a friend and email it to me. ;)
    Its the same name @lycos. thanxs.
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  • From ANON - Dru on April 29, 2005
    I'm confused as to why you think you can't post the higher rated version at this site when it is called ADULT Fan Fiction and it accepts NC-17 stories. This site was created to house the higher rated fics that other sites are to afraid to archive for fear of the moral majority bitching up a storm, i.e. fanfiction.net. Are you saying that the full story is somehow X rated? Forgive me but I just don't see how that's possible. I've read some pretty kinky/violent/obscene stories at this site and they ALL were rated NC-17 and I'm not really seeing how your story is going in that direction. That's a compliment by the way.

    One constructive criticism. You should fix the typos in your summary. It really reflects badly on your story and many people may skip checking your fic out because they will assume your work is riddled with misspellings and grammar problems. It's one of the red flags that veteran fan fic readers look for when searching for new stories to read. Just a thought.

    Good luck with the rest of your story and I really would like to know why you think you can't post your other version here. Email me the answer if you have time.
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  • From ANON - LZ on April 24, 2005
    This is a very fascinating story to say the least. As an avid A/P fan I was immediatly drawn to the story. So far I think you've done a good job. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Joe C on April 23, 2005
    Wow, this is a great beginning! I'm very intrigued to see what happens next, and how this story will play out. Keep up the angst!
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