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Reviews for Going Back to Yesterday

By : Alethia
  • From ANON - jeannie on November 16, 2005
    amazing work... write more
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  • From FelsGoddess on November 15, 2005
    Wow, very powerful.
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  • From ANON - Mirelle on November 13, 2005
    WOW!! That was phenomenal! I don't really know where to start, since everything just melded together beautifully. Your writing is like what a good orchestra should be, with all the parts working together to become one unified masterpiece. The descriptions of what Padme was feeling and thinking worked brilliantly with the 'reality' of what was going on around her, particularily your description of her diluted feelings while Anakin was inside of her. The dialogue fit in perfectly, with just the right amount of back and forth between Padme and Anakin, but without making it too 'talky'... if that makes any sense. With the added pressure from Anakin sending her force thoughts and feelings, I had a perfect picture of what was happenning in my mind, and was able to really get a clear sense of what Padme was feeling. Her confusion, and to a certain degree disbelief, over what was going on with Anakin was pitch perfect given the circumstances she found herself in, and led perfectly to the revealation that it was only in her head. Brilliant work, and I hope we'll see more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - BloodRaven77 on November 11, 2005
    Wow this was so fiery and so intense! I love how things blur between fantasy and reality in her mind so that she can no longer tell if she is dreaming or awake! I look forward to seeing more!! =D
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  • From ANON - MysticalElf on September 21, 2005
    PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 30, 2005
    Wow! That was extraordinarily well-written! Please, continue writing it! I'm a huge fan of Anakin/Padme. Their story was so poignant that it touched my heart. I think you captured Padme really well. Although there were a lot of things in the last prequel that bothered me, the one thing that I adored, was the love and the romance between Padme and Anakin. He adored her, it was somewhat like an old fashioned romance. Anyway, I'm babbling, lol. Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - ivorycoral on June 13, 2005
    This was really well written. And I love the ending up to this point, but this better not be the complete, final ending to this story. I'll be sad if it is. I like the descriptive style you use too. Nowadays it's really hard to write descriptively without getting carried away, but you somehow manage it; I'm impressed. Keep writing, I'd like to know how this turns out.
    Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses
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  • From ANON - Avion on June 06, 2005
    Oh my gosh! I hope you update! You updated in fanfiction.net but not here? Where the fic is UNEDITED!? Oh please ?PLEASE update!!!! And I found out you've posted the third chapter already on some other site, or was it forum? PLEASE I BEG OF YOU GIVE US SOMETHING!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fres on May 29, 2005
    Excellent story!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Timebound on May 21, 2005
    WOW. This is really good. Can't wait to read more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - CREAMPUFF on May 20, 2005
    OMG, THAT WAS SO GOOD, PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE, I JUST SAW ROTS AND IT WAS SO GOOD, BUT I THINK THAT WE ALL NEED A MORE HAPPY ENDING, I LOVE ANAKIN AND PADME TOGETHER SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH YOUR STORY.
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  • From ANON - InuMiko on May 20, 2005
    That was... amazing. I noticed it a few days ago, but didn't want to read it clearly said 'spoilers'. Now that I've actually seen episode 3, I just have to say... wow. And... damn. I love how this feels "trancelike", and can't wait for you to update it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2005
    Excellent start. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Mika on May 20, 2005
    Very well done, I urge you to continue this fic. Great job and please continue/update. I'll check on this from time to time.
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  • From ANON - Fukari on May 18, 2005
    This story has potential and I think it headed off with a great start, I'm defintaely looking forward very much to the next chapter. The descriptions is you're story is wonderful (: It makes my mind automatically create images in my head, and its like a mini movie that plays out in my head . Did that make sense? Ah, sorry...

    BUT YOUR STORY ROCKS!

    Update soon!
    Fukari loves ye ;
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