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Reviews for Spirits Forged in Fire

By : pegasus2704
  • From autumnbrandolyn on October 01, 2019

    This story is incredible. I stayed up all night to read it, I can't believe I never found it before. Please tell me its not abandoned <3


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  • From 987654321 on December 17, 2010
    absolutely love your spin on Troy, Achilles emotions are much more raw than in the film, he is more human, vunerable which is exciting.
    I really want to know what happens, does he die in the War, does Breseallas (deffo know i spelt that wrong lol) make it and warn that the enemy Greeks are coming.
    Im relatively new and i dont know how im going to know when you have updated, please help
    Oh yes, please update when you can, i love it!
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  • From sunshine818 on May 06, 2009
    Update soon! I admire you're writing and am looking forward to reading more. I also wish a sequel on embracing darkness..
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  • From Stonekipsta on January 15, 2009
    I loved this movie, and, even though I knew Achilles died in the end, i was still sad. Thank you for writing this AU of Troy, it's beleiveable, and it gives a taste of what could have been.
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  • From cherry617 on September 06, 2007
    update soon
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  • From charmed03 on August 11, 2007
    oh ma god!!! this is so good!!!

    PLEASE don't let achilles and briseis die!!! i want them to be together!!!

    and please finish the story soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Melinda on November 20, 2006
    Wow! This story is really awesome! There is only one fault that I can pick ( I myself used to do this until a real author, Sally Odgens, corrected me)

    When writing speech, eg. "Don't do that," he said. you must not use a capital for the he or she. I know that it's weird but that's the way to write.


    Anyway, your story is awesome and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Angelica on July 05, 2006
    OMG you cant just leave this story at this please oh please contuine this story i beg of you to please update i really like this story and would love to read it till the very end of it so please please please update it thank you, for this story because it makes my boring days actually non boring lol
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  • From ANON - Candice on January 20, 2006
    aww.. this is so sad. Ive waited for you to update forever.. please update again.. i must know what happens. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Bloodykisses on December 22, 2005
    Yes i love it..YOU MUSTTTTTTTTTT CONTINUE IT...seriously i will be impatentily waiting for your next chap, please update soon. GOOD GOOD GOOD job so far, althouh i would like it that before you finish the story, have Brisais suck his cock hehehehehe Sorry but make his cock huge ok? and describe it in DETAIL...other than that, its really kool....
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  • From ANON - legolas_estelstar on December 19, 2005
    wow! what a twist!! i just hope odisseus doesnt die or come against achilles!! oh and, haha it would have been so cool to see achilles in all his divilish power say he had a hunting to do and kill those who are after him, starting with kale. you know what im saytinh
    / ohohohohoho. anyway, you know? i would like to read a story (a romantic one) about eros and psyque. know that story? its so sweet!! so a romantic fan fiction about them would be so cool... anyway, take care!
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  • From ANON - legolas_estelstar on December 19, 2005
    wow!! powerful words. im so proud! your maintening a precious balance between fuzzy feelings and pathtic romance. your doing so good! take care!
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  • From ANON - legolas_estelstar on December 19, 2005
    after being raped so savagely, do you honestly think she could walk, much less run? she would crawl... gee... anyway, great chapters. but, gasp eggads! i hope it doesnt have a sad ending. ! happy christmas'!
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  • From ANON - legolas_estelstar on December 19, 2005
    forgive me, ive been so happy reading this chapters that i forgot to review. nice story. ive always wanted to read a happy aquiles briseida story. (those names are translated) thankyou so much, you are a very good writter! happy holidays!
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  • From ANON - etherealprey on November 29, 2005
    OMG! Your story is amazing, and I do hope you write more! Please continue, I MUST know what happens next!
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