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Reviews for Spirits Forged in Fire

By : pegasus2704
  • From ANON - smileyjones on January 10, 2005
    This is the best troy fan fiction that I have read and I hope that you post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Little-Waif on December 15, 2004
    I love this story, and can't wait for the last chapters. I'm glad you chose to let Achilles live! It was elegant and woven into the movie nicely. I hope you keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Lauren on December 07, 2004
    More great chapters i love where this story is going. Please continue on i would like to know what happens with the baby and if they can rebuild Troy. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - catt on December 07, 2004
    oooooooooooooooooooo great so far. FINALLY THEY ARE TOGETHER AGAIN. Oooooo GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR TEST. i WISH YA THE BEST!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - CAterina on December 06, 2004
    Oh I got so sad when Hector got killed. Except for that I enjoyed reading the last chapters and I hope for more soon :) Take care.

    Caterina
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  • From ANON - catt on December 06, 2004
    HOLY CRAP!!!!! AWESOME CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOOOOO HE RAPED HER THE BASTARD!!!!!*Does a repay, and helps achillies gut him* heheheehhe sorry, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! BYE BYE!!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - catt on December 05, 2004
    Oooooo very good chappie. I hope he kills the bastard. I swear the king has to die. PLEASE DON'T LET ACHILLIES DIE!!!!!!Damn oooooooooooo please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nemesis27 on December 05, 2004
    Thus far, this is a very interesting story. The subject in itself is classical and faithful to the film and the legends. You treat it in a careful manner, presenting many characters and a complex action beautifully and in few chapters. That is a plus and I commend you for it. Personally, while reading it I found I could almost view it as a play, the dialogue very mythologic.

    My only critique, and it is really picking on a small detail, concerns the use of the word "sir" at some point in your story to which I would object on the grounds of it being too 1800 rather than ancient Greek type of language.

    Other than that, I liked it and I hope you will continue.


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  • From ANON - Lauren on December 05, 2004
    Three words- MORE MORE MORE! Im loving this story you write the chracters so well and have such a great plot! This story is really emotional and has loads of depth. I loved the emotional moment between Archilles and Briseis.
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  • From ANON - catt on December 05, 2004
    HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thank you for updating these three chappies, I'm really enjoying your story so far. Please update soon, and keep up with the good work. ^_^
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  • From ANON - catt on December 03, 2004
    Oooooo really good so far. Its nice to see her with a fighting spirit, but I wonder though what would happen in the future for both her and him. Would she despites him or love him. So many questions. So many possiblities. Hheheheheh good chappie. I love it. Going good so far, keep up the good work. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - jes on December 03, 2004
    i loved the movie troy, and ive been eating up all these fanfics about it, and i like yours too! i like how you're not moving too fast, but not too slow either, and keeping up w/ both the couple and what's going on back in troy. good job, keep it up. can't wait for the next update!! :o)
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  • From ANON - Lauren on December 02, 2004
    Hey i love this story! I love Achilles/Briseis stories and especially this one as you do a great job of writing Briseis charcter. You show her to be incredibly strong, and it works really well with Achilles character as well so keep going please! I love how you showed the reaction of her family to Briseis's 'death', which i think was lacking in the film. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - catt on December 02, 2004
    HIYA!!!Ok i'll be honest with ya. I like and I hope to see you write more. Please update soon. I can hardly wait!!!!!!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - caterina on December 01, 2004
    hi! I am really enjoying reading this story!! I am glad that you donīt follow the movie because it makes it very intersting cause you donīt know what is going to happend. Hope to read more from you soon cause Iīll be checking this story out! =)
    Take care.

    Caterina
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