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Reviews for Spirits Forged in Fire

By : pegasus2704
  • From ANON - Execrable on March 20, 2005
    Very good story. I am very impressed and I thought this one was actually worth reviewing. Most people on this site do not write very well, so it is a breath of fresh air to finally stumble across something that is worth reading. A few things I picked up on: uncomparable should be incomparable and when using the word "course" when referring to something harsh or brittle it should in fact be "coarse," but other than that, your spelling and grammar are almost infallible. Again, very good indeed.
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  • From ANON - shelby on March 07, 2005
    omg, i love your story, i just stumbled upon it tonight but i think it is BRILLIANT. please update it is wonderful and you are a gifted author!
    -Shelby
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  • From ANON - Chrystal on March 04, 2005
    Wow. This story is sooooooo good. You wrote beautifully and I felt as though I were watching the movie. Awesome job. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Donna Lynn on February 27, 2005
    I must admit the rape description was rather...realistic. I like writers who don't hold back and keep it real, graphic, like real life. I really enjoyed the graphicness of the chapter it kept my attention all the way through. You didn't over do it either just so you know. You can never over do it when it comes to such things.
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  • From ANON - smileyjones on February 17, 2005
    I love this story. It is the best Troy fic that I have read and I hope you will write more soon.
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  • From ANON - gg on February 16, 2005
    love the story, great details!
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  • From ANON - candice on February 16, 2005
    love your story
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  • From ANON - catt on February 16, 2005
    Uh oh, i have a funny feeling about that dream they both had. Somethings bad gonna happen isn't it? Not good. But good chappie!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - furious princess on February 05, 2005
    *squeal* this is great! Beautiful language. Very elegant and poetic, and the plot's very believable. One minor flaw though: I think you use "though" a tad bit too much, but it doesn't affect the good story.
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  • From ANON - catt on February 05, 2005
    WOOT!!! LOVE CHAPPIE!!!! UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - kace on February 03, 2005
    Awesome fan fic! Can't wait untill the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - candice on February 03, 2005
    great story
    keep updating :0)
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  • From ANON - Jade on February 03, 2005
    Wow. I am really enjoying this! Please keep it up! And more soon, sil vous plait!
    Hahaha, nice work!
    xoxo
    Jade
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  • From ANON - catt on February 02, 2005
    Wow, I so loved those chappies girly. I am so happy you updated!!! I hope everythings cool and stuff. Can't wait until the next chappie!!! bye bye!!!!

    Catt ^_^
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  • From ANON - catt on January 12, 2005
    Great chapter, great story, just sad you haven't updated in a while, I hope everythings ok. Please update soon!!!! Bye bye!!!!! Catt^_^
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