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Reviews for Only Forever

By : flameboi
  • From ANON - Kittiara on September 01, 2004
    Whooo, I'm glad I had the sudden urge to read some good ol' Labyrinth slash. This was brilliant. A fabulous wel well done. I envy those with a talent for writing, because although I could most likely pull off something half-decent, rarely do I find myself with the motivn. n. This made my night, thanks! :3
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  • From on February 27, 2004
    Well that is a big twist from the movie. But just the samlikeliked it! You have a great style of writting I hope there will be more...!
    Untilnextime-Jade
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  • From ANON - Korin on December 04, 2003
    Wonderful. I loved it! I am glad that I am not the only one who has had thoughts about Toby and Ja. IT. IT was great. ^_^ Good job.
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  • From ANON - Velveteen on October 04, 2003
    ^_^ Very sweet, and true to the movie, at that. Good job, you're a wonderfully vivid writer.
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  • From ANON - Julia on September 24, 2003
    Brilliant idea to use Toby - I never thought of it myself, but the way you do it it seems perfectly logical. I like the way you portray Toby as a teenager and his sister as a grown-up - it makes sense that his experiences left Toby different.
    The suicide... truth be told, that can be painfull to read for someone who had to loose somebody that way, because you write it so realistically. I really think a warning would be a good idea.
    Toby and the goblin king - what can I say, red hot, and that mixture of cruelty and generosity and selfishness and dishonesty in Jareth is just right.
    In my mind, this screams out for a second chapter; I can just imagine how Toby's sister could get back into Jareth's realm and I'm just saying Persephone as for a possible ending.
    Oh, and of course the "I wish I could see them" is very reminiscent of Beauty, the Beast and the mirrow. But it makes sense and belongs there, and paralells can never be quite avoided.
    If any amount of blatant flattery could persuade you to write more of this, I'll be happy to supit.
    it.

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  • From ANON - SailorAurora on September 04, 2003
    that was great! please write more chapters.. I'd like to read some more :D
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  • From ANON - colie on August 06, 2003
    iee this is the first (and probably only ;.;) slash labyrinth story i've seen! it was really nicely , i , i must say. the ending was really good, it was almost not an ending (if you can understand that!). it left me thinking that there was more, but really didn't leave me wanting to beg for more. it was a damn good ending. i think that i will take a look and see if you have other stuff. oi, have you ever noticed that one of Jareth's eyes is brown and the other is blue? ^_~
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  • From ANON - YaoiBoyDemonLover on July 11, 2003
    OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING AND BEAUTI!!! !!!
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  • From wickedorin on June 01, 2003
    Ooooooohhh. I very much enjoyed this. And luckily I can picture every moment of it. Very nice. Very g Ori
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  • From ANON - Zeda on March 21, 2003
    OH MY GOD, my dream come true-! THIS IS LOVELY!
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  • From ANON - Elfy on February 27, 2003
    I was a bit irritated by the idea at first (Labyrinth slash I mean), but your story was very nice ^_^ Liked it alot. Well written, nice character design and all. *applauses*
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  • From ANON - CassandraTerra on January 22, 2003
    I'm so happy you posted here (stupid ff.net) . I love you story. It's beautiful and very well wen! en! I hope you write more about Toby and Gareth .

    Cassandra
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  • From ANON - Taiorami on January 18, 2003
    I liked this alot. IT was written very well and the imagery was beatiful, plus it wasn't just sex with no plot, which is always a plus. The ending was a tad bittersweet becase Toby seems destined to forget about his family, but at the same time he wouldn't have been happy otherwise. It's...lovely.
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