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Reviews for Fates wicked sense of humor

By : Suryallee7104
  • From ANON - smashthemirror on November 05, 2006
    I actually really like this...true, it does need a beta but the story itself is very interesting and very strong. It's not something that I would have thought up, so I'm slightly jealous that you do it so well! Sam seems a little mellow to me, though with all he's gone through, that's definitely a reaction he could have. Though he is slightly different in the book than in the movie, and from other bits in your fic I'm guessing that you've read it, as well.

    I hope in future chapters you'll entertain the idea of him acting out or trying to get away at least once - it could prove interesting with Marko's new hold on him.

    I also like your interpretation of David...he's a delicious mix of evil and good intentions. I can't wait to read future parts of this. Good luck on finding a beta!
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