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By : Suryallee7104
  • From ANON - megara on November 27, 2006
    that's alright you are forgiven. poor paul, poor marco, poor sam, and alan i hope they are alright.
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  • From ANON - smashthemirror on November 26, 2006
    killer cliffhanger! I love it! Oh the possibilities, oh the character development!

    I'm feeling all right...I'm not in as much pain as I was, though I go back to the doctor for a checkup tomorrow. I get allergies in my ears at times, and every few years I get an infection or two. They just like to be dumb, sigh, and it drives me crazy. But thanks for your well wishes and concern!

    I totally agree with your note at the end. I'm not as keen on writing slash as I am reading...though I've done it in the past and have a piece in the works..I don't think that's a genre I'm particularly good at. But I agree that the vamps would most likely go both ways...and I know exactly what you're talking about on the commentary...that group in high school that you'd give anything to be a part of, but they just walk right by you. I went with that angle on free falling, as well, and it's served me very well. I've also noticed that it seems like lost boys fanfic seems to go in cycles...you get huge surges of het fic followed by a backlash of slash followed by another backlash of het...it goes on and on and on. I really don't mind either if they're written well and have a good plot, which yours does!

    though I wouldn't complain at a threesome or a triangle tossed about here and there, heh heh.

    anyway, keep up the good work! I'm sure this story will be finished before free falling, at any rate LOL
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 26, 2006
    WOW!! OMG!!! You had me gripping the edge of my seat, and scrolling down on the computer with the other!! Oh, the HORROR!!! And, poor PAUL!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 21, 2006
    ::Jumps up and down:: YAYYYYY!!! Another brilliant chapter!!!! Woot woot!!! Woot woot!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!! Thank GOD, You don;t believe in love at first sight, that shit makes me sick!!!!!!!! Love ya, toodles and poodles!!!!
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  • From ANON - smashthemirror on November 21, 2006
    Love part seven. Am sick with an ear infection so this made life so much better tonight!

    Oh alright, I won't be jealous...I suppose I have to write on mine again sometime, ;)

    Love your interactions between Paul and young allen. Too cute, and it really helps to shape both personalities. I love what you do with allen and sam, usually I can't deal with them but you actually make me care about their characters.

    I totally agree with your note at the end (I was totally startled at first because there wasn't an author's note at the beginning, LOL). I think there's instant attraction, but that doesn't necessarily equal love or a lasting love. And it doesn't make for an interesting story...to me it's a plotline copout, so I definitely love all of the things you're putting the characters through while they're getting used to each other. It makes them that much more believable.

    Glad you liked 'I'll take the bad ones' - I nearly pulled that story more than once because I just wasn't sure how people took to it...I don't know why I wrote that, probably for the challenge aspect...but yeah, Paul's definitely my favorite, though dwayne gives him a run for his money these days. I think Paul's character is probably the devil on my shoulder when I'm writing fanfic, lol. But I love how you've developed his personality and can't wait to see what you do next! Keep up the great work!


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  • From ANON - smashthemirror on November 20, 2006
    loved parts five and six. just got home from working a late night, so it was great to have those to come home to! I love your interpretation of paul...you've got a great sensitivity about him, a great vulnerability which I absolutely love and envy. Also love your marko...you make him a great fine line between conniving and empathetic, and it works so well. Your explanations of everything are also very well thought out - I always love stories that make the situations more plausible than some brush-off explanation. And how I envy your Allen! I've never really written the Frog brothers because they've not really interested me and I never felt that I could actually do a good job of them, or Sam. But you do a fabulous job of turning them into intricate personalities. Oh I'm so jealous!

    epic? oh I hear you. Believe me I hear you. I remember when I thought free falling was going to be twenty chapters, tops, maybe, if I pushed it. Here I am a year and nearly fifty chapters later, heh. I have to say, it delights me that there will be plenty more to read though, and that it's fun for you to write! Though no matter what, don't let people pressure you into trying to always put out more if you don't feel ready to do so. You have such a wonderful plot going, don't feel the need to compromise it for speed. Write at your own pace, and I'll at least keep coming back to see how everything turns out!
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  • From ANON - Raven on November 19, 2006
    Hi

    I really liked what you have written so far please continue to write!
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 18, 2006
    Definitely AN EPIC!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - megara on November 18, 2006
    OH NO! more please it is important that there is more to read.
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 16, 2006
    Once again I bow down to you and your talents!!!! I just love this STORY!! I don't know how many times i can say it!!!!! The personal struggles are the best! And, i think it's really cool how you explained the past of the Lost Boys!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - smashthemirror on November 16, 2006
    part three was excellent...love what you're doing with sam, and how you're expanding marco's character.

    I like your thoughts on the origins of the boys in part four, too. you definitely put a lot of thought into it. can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 14, 2006
    YAYYYYYY!!!!! You updated!! It felt as if I was waiting forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the chapter!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Lina on November 10, 2006
    LOL!!! Poor Sam and Marko. Ahhhh, the frustration I love it!!!! Seriously, awesome story, and I love your writing style!
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 09, 2006
    WOW! WHATA N AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - el dorko on November 07, 2006
    this is really awesome. and for someone who has english as a second language, this is really really really awesome. please please please continue!!!!
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