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We're all monsters here
By : MissMikaele
Category: M through R > Pitch Black
Views: 10783 -:- Recommendations : 2 -:- Currently Reading : 2Disclaimer: I do not own Pitch Black, nor the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. - Chapter List
Holy wow its been awhile since ive updated. my computer broke, then i had a baby BUT now i have a brand new laptop and a almost one year old so expect some pretty frequent updates. i spent a few hours going back and editing anf fixing some spelling mistakes so if youre just reading this chapter id like to gently ask you readers to go back and reread it and maybe review it :) anyway thanks to everyone thats read this story and to everyone who hasnt given up on it.
The elevater was going up more slowly then last time. It was making screeching noises but it was music to her ears. I cant believe it, Sasha thought to herself, im actually going to get out of here. She looked over at her newest traveling companion then at Riddick. sure the air was heavy with anger and awkwardness but that wouldnt stop her from being giddy at the prospect , no, the inevitability of their escape.
"So whats the plan Grayson? how are you going to help?" she looked at him once more as she asked the question.
"Well, im not sure what you guys where planning to do once you got up but i know where they keep supplies. And im sure thats helpful. No matter how bad ass you are all of our bodies are used to the heat down here and i doubt any of us would be comfortable with how cool it is up there and its damn near impossible to live outside. So we pack up on some stuff like knifes, and jackets then i say we look for transportaton. But thats just me. If anyone has a better idea im all ears." He finished with a tone that suggested otherwise, looking directly at Riddick. Maybe this kid does have some balls. Or hes an idiot.
"Its a pretty good plan i guess, not that we have much else, this is all kind of impromptu. Can you use a knife at all or do we have to watch your ass?" Sasha asked since Riddick was being quiet. Either he was mad or he was thinking. She hoped it was the latter. she couldnt deal with them butting heads. Or worse, him tasting their near freedom and ditching her. Plus she wouldnt mind some more detials being added to this "plan" of Grayson's.
"Uhm not so much no... I was hoping one of you could help me there." he said sheepishly. Looks like he was a little too quick taking control. Sasha saw Riddick crack a small smile.
"What a surprise. When the doors open you go in front of us till we get to where they keep their supplies then stay in the middle. Sasha will take the front and i'll cover your ass, unless thats a problem?" Riddick smiled as he finished.
"No, as long as you dont stab me in the back. Literally and figuratively."
"Well, we'll see about that wont we?" Riddick laughed as the elevator came to a stop. Here goes nothing.
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